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The knife hit me in my leg. I fell backwards and I couldn't breathe anymore. Blood was gushing out my leg, my neck was black and blue because of Ryan his hand and my spine got hit so many times, I don't know if I had broken my back. I wanted to drift off and forget the pain. I didn't want to be here anymore. But then I heard Tris scream. I tilted my heavy head and saw Ryan between her legs. Her dress had ridden up and he pushed her down with his entire body. She was fighting, beating around her with frantic movements but it didn't help. It was like he didn't even feel it. He was saying things but I didn't hear it, a loud peep resounding in my head. Then suddenly he brought his face down to her neck and she screamed. A scream full of pain and hopelessness. A sort of strength came over me. My last momentum of being clear. He was going to kill Tris and I couldn't let that happen. I stood up, my body protesting but my mind clearer than ever. I removed the knife from my leg, blood rushing
“Jane. Thank you. You saved her life. I owe you more than anything I could ever give you.” He said with a serious expression. I could see rage was still going through his entire being and that he was trying to calm down. I looked back at my best friend, a peaceful expression on her face. “No, I think you saved her life. I'm pretty sure she was dying.” I softly said. “I felt pain. I thought it was my own, but it was hers. I should've known.” Damon responded with a guilty voice. “Look, I have no idea what that means. You are not human, that's all I know at this point. And Ryan or Alexander or whatever his name is, is also not. And right now I'm too fucked up to even care.” I said back. He steered the car right into a long driveway. A beautiful house came into view. There was greenery everywhere and the house itself was massive. A small mansion. “You live here!?” I said with a gasp. “Yup. Welcome in.” Damon said and he parked up the car. “Will you be alright walking in?” He asked me. I
I laid in bed on my back with two strong arms around me, a cool body pressed against me and the most amazing smell surrounding me. Cinnamon. Memories of yesterday came flooding in and I opened my eyes, taking in my location. I stared at the ceiling and needed a moment to comprehend what was happening. I looked next to me to Jane who was stirring awake. She was laying against me, her arm draped over me, the back of her hand pressed against Damon his chest.Moose was down by her feet, taking up half of the bed. He was laying like a starfish on his back and pushed the three of us to the other side of the bed. I looked to my other side and saw Damon, fully pressed against me with his leg over me. His one arm was under my neck and his other arm was holding the side of my body. His head was resting above my head and I laid safe and secure in the nook of his neck. Oh my god. I was in bed with Damon Hayes.“I'm going to have a shower. Be right back.” Jane whispered to me once she saw I was aw
The doorbell rang and Moose started barking, jumping up and down by the window. Damon went to the door and got the breakfast that was finally delivered. He walked back with three bags. We stood up to help but he shook his head, signalling for us to stay seated. “Let us help. It's too much on your own. You'll be taking ages.” I said to him. Damon laughed. “Want to see some real speed?” he said. Before I could respond, a whirlwind of movement happened around us. Suddenly the kitchen island was stacked with food. Pancakes, eggs cooked every way, toast, fruit, bagels, cut up cheese and meats, cereal, sweet cakes, pretzels, sausages, hash browns, beans and different kind of juices and smoothies.Jane and I were star struck and looked at the table in a daze. “That's not cool man. I thought I was imagining this shit yesterday.” Jane said while putting her head in her hands. “Jane, with all that happened yesterday, you're mentally stronger than you think. I said I would do everything in my po
“Do you mind if I have a bath?“ Tris asked me.With me? Maybe we can continue what we started this morning. And I can keep you safe.“Of course,“ I said instead. I stepped forward to walk her up but she jumped off the stool. “Don't worry, I know where it is,“ she said and walked out. I felt a twinge of disappointment but that vanished when I watched her walk out. She was in my house, safe and sound. And hopefully she would be sleeping in my bed again tonight.“You feel better now? Maybe you need a snickers?” Jane asked me in a joking tone. I flipped her off. “I have decided not to let Tris leave my eyesight or my house until Alexander is dead. Problem solved. He will get what's coming to him.” I said. Jane raised an eyebrow. ‘‘That seems highly not executable. What's this -very- unhealthy obsession with Tris, if I may ask?” She asked.I looked at the door and hesitated. “This is a conversation I wanted to have alone with Tris. It's a weird phenomenon with my kind. But since you are al
I had one of the best pizza's of my life. This man didn't eat but man he did know where to get food from. After vacuum cleaning all the feathers, the pizza arrived and we settled in. The tea was flowing for me and Damon was drinking double and triple Whiskeys the same speed as I was drinking my tea. Jane was slowing down on her drink, laughing at every typical thing Dracula did and asking Damon if he did the same.“Do you have exceptional swordsmanship?”“Can you shapeshift?”“How come you don't burn to a crisp in the sun?”“Can you control the weather?”“Can you control fire?”“Can you touch silver?”“Are you going to die if we stab you with a wooden stake?”At every single question, Damon sighed again. Apparently he could do none of the above and walking in the sun was just something made up to make humans feel more safe who had a strong idea they existed. “You suck as a vampire,” Jane said while putting her head down on the couch. Damon groaned and put his head on my shoulder which
I woke up to someone kissing my cheek. “Wake up my favourite student. Time for university.” Damon whispered to me. I groaned and tried to turn away, not ready for this day yet. Damon laughed and pulled me towards him in the bed, kissing my cheek again. “Not while I'm in the same bed you pervert,” Jane groaned, cracking open an eye. “Time for school, ladies!” Damon shouted and we both grabbed the blanket and pulled it over our heads.After some complaining we walked downstairs, still in our pyjamas and we walked outside. We were going to my place to shower and get dressed. Damon was already waiting for us against the side of his car and I took the outside of his house in, my eyes widening. He stood against his Maserati and next to the Maserati was a red Ferrari Roma. He was already in his work clothes, wearing a white dress shirt and dark blue trousers. A large garden surrounded his house, the grass bright green and a few trees for perfect shading. “How long have you lived here?” I ask
I put my phone back into my bag, my breath catching and I hooked my arm into Logan's, happy that life was returning to normal. “Do you guys know where the teachers' lounge is?” A voice asked us from behind. We twirled around and a beautiful woman stood before us. Long blonde hair cascaded down her back and she was wearing a tight fitted red dress which accentuated all her features. She had a perfect body, her hips curving into a small waist and boobs big enough for some students to stop and watch her. Her nails were painted blood red, matching her lipstick. Logan quickly let go of me and started stammering.“Why.. Who.. Who do you need to see?” Logan finally managed. “Elise,” I heard an all too familiar voice say behind us. She smiled in his direction and looked at Logan. “Found him, thank you.” She said with a seductive voice, putting a hand on Logan's shoulder. Logan visibly tensed and gave a half nod.She walked in between Logan and I with a smirk and walked towards Damon, her hips