Loved all the past books and each story within this one.I wish they would have mentioned Massimo as her client once. Also why she didn’t keep up the A in the kids name as her fam tradition it would’ve been cute the name they chose as a middle name&still call them by that but have a first name with A
2026-05-11 03:25:34
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Nichola Boyd
I very much enjoyed this story. The flow from chapter to chapter was refreshing as there was no repetition in what happened from one chapter to the next. I did, however, find the incorrect usage of pronouns to be a little confusing. Overall, it's a great story author. I look forward to reading more
2024-01-26 05:15:23
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Ranchmom
I finished reading the first story of Rose & Aaron. I’m happy this is now starting. I can’t wait for updates. I think I like the angle of Andy & Gabriel’s story better so far. Keep it up and please update soon. Can’t wait.
2023-10-06 04:30:23
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lisy.
The story is good and flows well; I’m giving it 3 stars because of the pronouns and also because the names get mixed up at times. Author, if you are using a translator, remember that you need to write the paragraph correctly in your native language to get a proper translation.
2026-06-17 03:36:27
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Guille C
I honestly don’t understand why Good Novel doesn’t provide some tools to correct the mistakes and improves the quality of the products. Author mentioned on the first book that received comments about the pronouns and would correct them. No only she didn’t but this book has the same errors.
2024-10-04 07:51:05
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Guille C
The story is good but it drags around the bullying and trust, the rhythm is not as good as the first one. But what is completely annoying are the pronouns and the syntax. Even for a non native speaker, pronouns are the first things you learn. It simply doesn’t add up. I