I would love a story for Charia's children, they seem interesting. It was a great read, need some editing but good to go. Ryker showed them hell, Ryder is a sweet man. My favorite character is Melissa, she's so loyal it hurts sometimes.
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MarGO
1.5/5. Posting as 5 b/c app suppresses low reviews. The general idea of the story was interesting but writing was lacking and clunky. The ending was rushed, too. The book was full of grammatical and spelling errors that were distracting and made the story less enjoyable to read. Needs severe editing