Author has problems to make difference with HE and SHE ! It’s very annoying
2025-02-22 00:30:18
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Joan
Worth reading. The story was well written. Short and sweet.
2025-02-04 17:22:02
1
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Jewel Bautista
how could the villain get away with murder & kidnapping? there's a lot of loopholes with this story, not enough grovelling from the father and the ML
2025-01-06 02:41:01
6
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Delinda Schumacher
72 chapters 6-6-23
2023-06-07 03:57:44
3
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wuwuwuwuw
good short story, although the lack of grammar and spell checking made it a little incoherent at times
2025-03-06 02:56:47
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Ranchmom
Slow progression. Wish she gets stronger and more assertive
2023-05-19 03:26:00
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1234
Lmao, FL is pathetic, and she deserves all the "heartbreak" she got. Again, this is another book for weak little girls who get off on abuse and being mistreated. I dont understand why there are so many little girls out there that love being mistreated