Eloise
I settled on the coach, reaching for the television remote. Today was Lucian's big day and and the event was broadcasted. This silly illness had prevented me from accompanying him but I didn't care. "Tonight, the world will see my vision." I smiled, feeling the pride in my chest. The Live broadcast finally began, the spotlight settled on Lucian, as he made his way to the stage, looking impeccably polished in his tailored suit. I had never felt so proud, i couldn't help but smile and settled deeper in the cushion. “Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for joining us tonight. I’m thrilled to announce the launch of our latest collection—a collection crafted with love, passion, and elegance” He said, his deep steady voice echoed through the speakers. My heart fluttered at “Our” collection, i repeated in my mind. “I’ve been fortunate to work with someone special on this project, someone whose talent and dedication have brought this vision to life” Lucian said, his gaze sweeping over the crowd as he spoke. I held my breath, my pulse quickening with pride and excitement. I could practically feel my name on his lips. “It is my honor to introduce the genius behind this collection…” Lucian paused, then smiled. The camera zoomed in as he extended a hand, gesturing off-stage. My smile widened. The camera zoomed back to the crowd and a figure emerged the stage, it was Jennifer, Lucian’s ex lover and also my step-sister appeared on the screen. My breath caught in my throat, and from that moment my world began to spin. She stepped into the spotlight, gliding toward Lucian as if she belonged there— as if she had any right to stand on that stage, wearing a dazzling gown that sparkled beneath the lights. Jewels dripping from her neck and ears. Jewels i had designed. “What!…?” I exclaimed,my voice barely a breath. He turned to Jennifer,his eyes beaming, his arm slipping around her waist with a casual intimacy that made my stomach twist. The way he looked down at her with a softness, a warmth that i haven't seen in his eyes for a while now. “Jennifer has been an inspiration to me, both personally and professionally,” he said, his voice laced with admiration. “I couldn’t imagine anyone more fitting to lead this project with me” He continued. I felt my chest tighten, my breath coming in short, shallow gasps. This can't be happening. It can’t be! My marriage with Lucian shouldn't have happened, it was a marriage i accepted for my selfish reasons, my childhood crush came asking for my hand marriage and I couldn't miss that opportunity. I thought after this years with the child we bore together that our love must've awaken but it didn't. I was just loving a man that would never love me, a man that was never mine to began with, a marriage i could've rejected and discarded my selfish feelings. The crowd applauded, their faces lit with admiration and awe. People were clapping for Jennifer. Jennifer knew nothing about jewellery designs but would she want to miss the opportunity to bask in my glory? Never. The woman who had barely even been part of my life, who despised and spited me whenever she pleased. My childhood with Jennifer was hell, she and her mother took turns tormenting my life. “Tonight is not just a launch of our new project. It’s the start of a new chapter.” He paused, turning to Jennifer, his eyes full of disturbingly tender look. “A new chapter for us, and for our future together.” The crowd gasped. Tears streamed uncontrollably from my cheeks, the bethrayal stinging more than I cared to admit. “No!…” I whispered, horror creeping into my voice as the realization hit me. “It’s true,” He continued, his tone smooth and practiced, as if he was reading from a script. “Jennifer and i have rekindled our relationship we never had to let go of, and in light of that…” My heart pounded so loud i could barely hear his next words. “…I am announcing my separation from Eloise.” He announced. The word echoed, causing the tears i had steadied to start streaming again. Separation?” He was ending our marriage—on live television? What more better way to humiliate me than this? I sat frozen, watching as the camera captured Jennifer’s coy smile, she leaned into him with a sense of possession and victory. She won, He was her man to begin with, if not for what happened years ago I wouldn't be in this mess, I wouldn't be so humiliated for everyone to see. I couldn't process the humiliation and shock playing before me. My past decision was now daunting on me. A decision i made thinking it was my escape to peace. Lucian was my peace, a place I felt safe. Trembling, I pressed my hand against my mouth, as if to keep myself from screaming. I wanted to scream but my voice felt hollow and dry. I could feel my chest pounding, a deep pulsing wound that threatened to tear me apart. This was supposed to be my night, i thought, disbelief mingling with the agony tearing through me. Maybe I shouldn't have fall sick. He….. he promised. Lucian promised to change, he reassured me, but foolish me never knew it was all pretence, he never left Jennifer not even for once. “To new beginnings,” he said, his voice filled with conviction and worse was satisfaction. The live feed cut back to Lucian, who raised his glass in a toast. He clinked glasses with Jennifer, sealing the moment. The paparazzi swarmed in around them, taking pictures and they smiled at them. I couldn’t move, i couldn’t tear my gaze away from the screen as the man i trusted and loved for so long casually discarded me, stripping away everything i thought we had. My mind spun, a rush of cold sweat appeared on my forehead. The sacrifices, seven years wasted, the trust, every ounce of loyalty i had given him—it was all crushed underfoot like it had meant nothing. What was I expecting? Does a man really forget they first love ever? The camera zoomed in on Lucian and Jennifer one last time before the feed cut out. The screen went dark just like how my world went blank. My legs gave up and I crumbled on the floor. Suddenly, I felt a light grip on my dress. I turned immediately—it was Max, my Son. His eyes were wide with fear. "Mom, are you okay?" He asked, his voice barely audible.I know some of you have been impatient, waiting, hoping, and silently rooting for Eloise from the very beginning. You saw her broken, you saw her fight, you saw her lose, and yet you stayed, turning each page, holding your breath, waiting for her to finally get her moment. This story wasn’t meant to be rushed. Eloise’s journey was never about instant happiness, but about clawing her way through betrayal, heartbreak, revenge, and resilience. Every tear, every scream, every whispered “I can’t anymore” was building toward this ending. To those who loved Eloise fiercely, thank you. To those who hated her at times but couldn’t stop reading — thank you. To those who sent me messages like “When will she finally win?!” I heard you, I felt your impatience, but I promise it made this ending sweeter. This isn’t just a love story. It’s survival. It’s revenge. It’s healing. It’s proof that broken doesn’t mean defeated. And now, Eloise finally has her victory. She has her freedom. She has her lov
Eloise I leaned back in my office chair, staring at the glowing computer screen but not truly seeing it. Numbers blurred into meaningless shapes, emails stacked in neat, demanding rows. The quiet tick of the clock on the wall was the only rhythm in the room, and still I couldn’t shake the restless thrum in my chest. It had been a month since everything, since the final confrontation, since Lucian had been cut clean out of my life, since the venom of betrayal stopped coursing through every breath I took. A month since Damon’s last failed attempt to claw his way into control. A month of rediscovering silence. A month of relearning who I was without constantly looking over my shoulder. But grief had a way of leaving footprints on your soul. Some mornings I woke up light, unshackled, free. Other mornings, I carried the old ghosts. I closed my eyes and pressed my fingertips against my temple. Just five minutes of peace, I told myself. Five minutes before diving back into quarterly repo
Eloise It had been days since Mike came to me with his apology, days of me tossing on my bed, clutching my pillow, wondering if forgiveness was too generous a word to give a man who had once gambled with my trust. The air in my house had grown stale from replaying the same memories: the sting of Damon’s words, the confusion that crawled into my heart, and Mike’s face when he admitted what happened years ago. I couldn’t carry it alone anymore. My pride was starting to feel heavier than my heart. So I picked up my phone and dialed the one person who never sugarcoated anything. “Ava,” I breathed when she answered. “You sound like a storm about to break,” she said, her tone already bracing for confession. “Can you come over? I…I need you.” She didn’t ask why. “Give me twenty minutes.” By the time she arrived, I had already made tea, though neither of us touched it once we sat at the kitchen table. Ava leaned back in her chair, crossing her legs, her expression the mix of friend and
Eloise – First Person POV The steam from my shower still clung to my skin, wrapping me in its lingering warmth as I padded barefoot across the hardwood floor of my apartment. Droplets slipped down my collarbone and disappeared into the neckline of my silk robe. My hair, damp and heavy, clung to my shoulders. For weeks, my mornings had begun like this, quiet, steady, predictable. Peaceful, people would call it. They didn’t know how silence could sometimes be the loudest noise in the room. Peace had returned, yes. The atelier glimmered again, its glass walls spotless, its display cases brimming with new designs that bore only my name. My funds were back in my hands, and contracts that had once been ripped from me were signed anew under Eloise Laurent, my rebranded name. Every magazine headline called me a survivor, a fighter, the woman who rebuilt herself from the ashes. And yet, not one of those glittering titles filled the void Mike had carved into me. Every time I let my thoughts
Eloise The next day…. I sat on the second row, hands folded over the leather strap of my purse, listening to the shuffle of shoes, the murmured chatter, and the squeak of pens dragging against notepads. It had been trial after trial, one courtroom after another, and my body had grown used to this place, almost as if my ribs had sprouted their own wooden benches. I didn’t mind. No, not anymore. So far every soul that had left scars on me, physical, emotional, spiritual, had been made to choke down their share of the poison they brewed. Today would be no different. Today belonged to Jennifer. She stood at the front, just beyond the polished oak barrier that separated the public from the professionals. She was thinner than before, her once-gleaming blonde hair dulled and tied in a hasty knot. She had tried to wear confidence like a perfume, but it didn’t stick. Her navy suit hung on her as though it belonged to someone else, someone more solid. She kept her chin tilted, eyes darting
Eloise I never expected victory to feel like this. Not light. Not triumphant. It was heavy, like dragging a chest of gold through mud, valuable, priceless, but soaked in sweat and grit, with bruises carved into my palms. I was close to the parking lot when my phone buzzed, once, then again. My lawyer’s name flashed across the screen. “Eloise,” I murmured to myself, steadying my breath, “this is it.” I answered. “Yes?” “Don’t leave yet.” His voice carried a pulse of electricity. “Something came in encrypted files from one of Lucian’s accountants. He cracked. We’ve got everything.” My throat tightened. “Everything?” “Everything he thought he buried. Offshore accounts, dummy corporations, cash slush funds. He hid properties under aliases, even tried to move shares into shell holdings. It’s all here.” The world stilled around me. The hum of people walking by, the echo of doors opening, the shuffle of case files, all of it dimmed until only the sound of my own heartbeat remained.