The sense of horror is there, I love how you can seems to feel that you're inside the story as well.
2021-12-15 11:52:10
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Glow Peridote
I love this story. It is interesting and easy to read.
2021-12-15 11:45:17
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Blentkills
This is a really great story! I've been reading it in a one-shot. There are some slight grammar issues, but it's rare and it didn't bug me. A promising read!!!
2021-12-07 21:22:34
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HANINA
outstanding story
2021-07-30 12:11:58
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Cizzi
The story seem interesting, though there are a lot of telling, grammar mistakes and tense switches which made it hard for me to get immersed in the story.
2021-12-07 00:09:47
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Sunshine
the story has a quick pace. but author has done a good job describing the details carefully
2021-12-06 09:53:06
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loveforever
Similar to the reviews written before, I found that your story has an interesting plot, I love it, but, I am so sorry to say this, your story is full of grammatical mistakes. I don't know if it was exclusive, but the first chapters really need to be edited again. Don't let your readers go away.
2021-12-10 09:15:06
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Fransiscaroom
This book is pretty nice although the grammatical structure is simple..