The book starts out good. But not even 30% into the story, the author starts repeating everything, confusing names, and, makes the strong characters appear weak and insecure. The story has completely stalled and lost focus by the 35% mark. I don't think I'm going to be able to finish reading it.
2024-11-15 01:47:40
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Hayley Brazier
Started off so well, then when I purchased tokens to read more it was like the book was written by someone else, jumping back and forth. There’s no substance, it’s like reading a blurb.
2023-10-19 06:34:26
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Gayle Ecklund
Well, it started ok, but soon went downhill. Unfortunately, conversations were stilted and the flow just wasn't there. Read at your own risk.
2023-10-06 21:43:56
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Sierra
To much repeating of the storyline… slows the story down where it just doesn’t flow- author needs to keep characters names the same throughout book