I agree that the title doesn't match the book. Also, there was a sudden change between chapters 20 & 21. I liked the way the book was going, but now it is confusing. Why such an abrupt change? I'm totally confused. I like the rating at 5 til chapter 21. Now I will have to read further to decide.
2026-06-28 06:33:02
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Osato
The title doesn’t match the story!
2026-03-04 01:16:27
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Varsha Rani Kukas
149 chapters 22nd Feb 2026
2026-02-21 19:40:09
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bipbop
I liked the first 21 chapters then the story went backwards and the author changed what had happened between the two main characters. Really frustrating. It needs fixing.
2026-08-17 11:07:53
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MA ESPERANZA
Why does the storyline
change in Chapters 20 and 21? No continuity! In Chapter 21 The Ml ang FL ate supposed to meet with family to reveal the pregnancy but in Chapter 21 The ML o Ly finds our re pregnancy, Did The author change?
2026-06-12 11:34:58
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kiwi.dragon
Really wanted to enjoy this story but couldn't. Too many contradictions in the plot as in timelines, who said what, outfits, etc. As others have said, plot does a complete change around Ch20-21. It's almost like each chapter is a draft & no referencing back to previous storyline. Got to Ch50 & quit.