The first two mini stories were good but this third on is hard to follow. Not sure what’s happening. Character names changing from page to page along with the story line.
2023-05-22 08:57:20
5
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Derena Marie
Definitely fun and unique story.. well written with a great pace. A tiny repetitive in the inner monologs but worth the read!
2023-05-14 05:28:01
4
0
Steve James
I've only made it to chapter 21 as of now but so far, the book is a good read. The story is flowing along nicely and not rushed or dragged out like some others I've read. My compliments to the author.
2023-05-11 22:44:05
4
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Delinda Schumacher
91 chapters 5-10-23
2023-05-10 12:48:22
4
0
Antonina
this book is amazing, definitely recommend, it’s a shame it hasn’t got more readers and reviews...️amazing work author, keep going
2023-05-10 04:51:36
3
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Brandi Greene-Bachmeier
story is easy to follow and keeps the interest of the reader. only disturbance is the print errors doubling in sentences also with wrong character names but otherwise a well written story.