The story line is ok, but it’s clear that it’s written by a rather jong person- English is definitely not her first language and it’s vertical difficult to read the story with so many errors- I would definitely recommend to use AI to edit your chapter without changing the story
2025-07-22 02:53:36
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Sujata Mehta
Love the book please update the second book ...
2023-09-29 21:01:44
4
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Christine Owings
57 chapters 8/13/23
2023-08-14 01:40:26
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Unusual Write
Love this book
2023-08-11 12:54:46
3
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Tuny Ashley
Wow
such interesting and captivating book. I can see an up and coming popular novelist
2023-07-17 04:12:59
5
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Caser Sidney
Nice story, waiting for the next chapter. Thank you
2023-06-30 13:08:16
4
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Debbie writes
As expected from my best author, lit book you've got here ...
2023-06-17 21:18:20
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Sunnypearl
Thank you for reading
2023-06-13 00:09:19
3
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EveeJ
Some grammar/language differences throughout, but good interesting story with fun characters that make you invested in their stories. Excited for second book; thank you writer for a great time!
2024-08-17 11:28:31
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graciela.castano.l
Lovely story with interesting characters and storyline.