Rejected Luna, Desired Mate Reviews

great book

Story is interesting and getting good. Hopefully author will finish soon! - and please remove the chapters of the wrong novel…. I was so excited to think there were 20 more chapters but then realized it was a completely different story.

The book was getting good, unfortunately it stopped and jumped into an entirely different story

Great book however there are repeating chapters and another book in this as well.

This book would be good but it looks like there are 2 different stories mixed into this one book and there are a few chapters that are repeated. The author needs to read the first 30 chapters and do some editing. If they can fix that, I would love to read the book because it seems to be a good story

it started off good then it had repetitive paragraphs, names of characters where not consisnt and then the story started jumping all around. not worth paying for to read the same paragraphs six times over