It says this story is ongoing. If so, when are you going to update? Is there going to be an epilogue? Or a book two that's years later? Can you tell us what's happening please?
2025-10-09 07:42:48
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Parusha Naicker
OMG!!!!! I can't believe Jay and Zed are so pathetic!!!. Trapped by Amber, come on!!!!River caught up in this mess through no fault of hers. She needs a real man, or she can do it on her own!!!
2025-09-30 05:51:51
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Rita Sakr
also chapters 184 and 185 are duplicated :( what is happening
2025-09-23 03:53:37
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Roma Apps
182 & 183 are duplicate chapters.
2025-09-21 00:16:29
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Jacqueline Ford
I can't believe it so this is how to break up Jay and River, have that witch Amber get him slobbering drunk and she screws him and he thinks it's River so she can get her revenge. Mean while Zed's sneaking around looking for River. Author why do you dislike Jay being River? I know it's your story I
2025-09-06 07:55:47
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Jacqueline Ford
To the author of this great story. Chapters 168&169 are both the same from River's POV. It's just a small mistake. Great writing and keep up the good work.
2025-09-04 09:59:09
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Roma Apps
There are a couple of duplicated chapters. However, I am loving the book
2025-09-01 07:57:19
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Jamila Ismail
i really love the book serious I keep reading it.
2025-08-12 04:25:18
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Jacqueline Ford
Oh come on! Zed can't learn the truth that he has a son with River? He needs to know the truth and Amber needs to be exposed for the witch (I'm being kind) she really is. Let Zed get another DNA test without Amber knowing from another Doctor. Zed needs to be part of his son's life.
2025-08-08 09:20:42
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Silvia
I just hope that it isn’t going to go for ever just to drag it on.