Nice read. Good plot.
Only thing is grammar mistakes ...but still manageable to read.
Good afforded.
2024-01-17 09:28:18
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Azure moon
the story was good though the grammar was barely bearable. I love that fact that daisy's father, though, really is evil, he still truly loves her daughter. I just didn't like that much was that Steve was so asshole towards her, made her witness his affairs, and just easily got with her at the end.
2023-11-12 19:16:03
4
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Danielle Tyrrell
Make sure you read to the end. A truely remarkable story, with lots of twists. Worth the read.
2023-11-12 18:03:14
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DKS
Very nice story
2023-11-12 06:47:32
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The therapist
I wish Mr Montero can just be arrested already, I hate Steve