Taking Her Home Reviews

Really good so far thoroughly enjoying it ...

Read again because I enjoyed the story so much!

Great story. Especially liked the second half. Will read again

95 chapters 9-29-23

37 chapters 5-3-23

Good story. Needs to be proofread for all the mistakes. Two chapters are duplicated.

Ivy and Max’s book started out toxic. Was not needed. Ivy is a spoiled brat. Really not capo material. She needed saving all the time things happened. Max being a sniper was non-existing. Did nothing to show for it. The conversation was boring and cringe. There wasnt an actual mafia plot going on.

The first book was chaotic. Writer was trying too hard to make Vince a playboy, it really wasnt needed. It almost ruined his character. Its okay to write males that are not manwhores or playboys. Not much going on. Conversation became repetitive and boring. Enzo as the villain was not interesting.