The story is all over the place and there are so many errors that it makes things even more confusing. It’s a shame considering it started off so well.
2023-12-26 23:16:40
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Chekeria
The errors make the book confusing. It’s a little annoying.
2023-11-24 02:14:14
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Mical Perez
The book is good but it takes a looottt of wait to the author put the updates.. it's been a week and no new updates
2023-11-20 15:48:43
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Ilene C Griffiths
Great story , I can't put it down
2023-11-13 01:43:10
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Linda June Cowlishaw
it says above that there's 132 chapters but only 131 are available and it's left up in the air is there more to come?
2023-09-28 18:44:17
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mod.eljoy.porteria
The sentences / paragraph has been almost fixed halfway through not sure if writer was changed or what not but please continue the story
2023-09-24 17:33:45
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Wandy
The title is alpha king and his Luna but the story is about Octavia which is not the alpha king’s luna
2023-09-22 19:21:20
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calisj356
Are there not going to be any more updates?
2023-09-22 15:25:44
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ms. lane
I nominate myself to become your editor
2023-09-22 01:17:19
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Michelle Cornick
This a good book but why stop with the updates? It's been over a month since a update