The Alpha and the Rental Luna Reviews

Thank you everyone who has taken the time to read my story and leave me feedback. I’m currently in the process of updating the earlier chapters to make it more appealing and interesting and add elements that have been missing the first time around. Feel free to leave me a comment with suggestions ...

Really enjoying his so far. The tension between Apple and Sly is building and I can't wait to see how it will all play out. I love your writing style and your storytelling.

Hi all! Thank you for taking the time to check out my story! I am having a lot of fun writing this one for you all and I hope you have fun reading it. I look forward to reading your comments and learning about what you think .

is this going to be a series? even if it's going to be standalones, I think it'll be perfect as a series

I can honestly say that I am very upset there are only 7 chapters to read so far. This story is great! I do hope you update daily. I foresee some fun scenes coming up. Great job, author! This is amazing! ...

I’m at chapter 20 and I just love Alexis’s scenes. Apple falls a bit flat to me, so I don’t feel for her much. But the plot is ok and the grammar and writing is perfect. I wish I could read a spinoff on Alexis, like her POV before Sylvester met Apple. I think I’d enjoy that story more.

The story plot is beautiful. The problem is that the characters are inconsistent. FL kept saying NO to the ML, so why didn't she cancel the contract already? Waiting for what? Also, isn't she's already paid? Paid w/o doing anything? She should return the money. What is she, a prude?