The Alpha's Burden Reviews

you are amazing author I have read all your stories. I can't wait for more. you truly are amazing keep up the amazing job

Forester - I think you may have missed a couple things in the beginning of the story. The twin brothers are secondary characters. I don’t want to give anything away for other readers but I would encourage you to reread. Thanks!

I liked this story! There were a few points that were confusing in the beginning about the FL ‘s twin brothers. I felt like not every storyline was complete or it was rushed or haphazardly planned. That a some grammatical errors kept me from giving it more stars. But I did read to the end!

the FM is a rare white wolf, not many are aware, she's proud of it - and then her own mate doesn't react in any way when he meets her wolf and the fact she's a white wolf is never mentioned again. just like her brothers suddenly never existed. Ridiculous

the author doesn't remember or willingly ignores what she's written before - it's ridiculous and annoying - about 35 chapters are good then the whole story changes and previous chapters are completely forgotten and the story gets horribly fabricated

it starts good but then gets ridiculous and annoying - the FM has twin brothers who shall take over the pack, she's trained to be Luna of another pack. then suddenly she's always been an only child and her mate will take over the pack