The Alpha’s Pretend Mate Ulasan

Hello to my dearest readers, I’ve gotten comments from you all on the name placements and the need for me to edit my books, I’m currently going all over and editing the book, I’m really greatful to you all for reading this book despite the errors, here is me promising that I’m going do a good edit.

I liked the story but this book needs editing. Kelsey met the parents twice, there are names misspelled, both the Beta and Gamma are referred to as B and G. I'm not sure if author did that on purpose or just didn't want to bother on character development. There also was a chapter that was repeated.

Hello writer, just wanted to tell you that Dennis's parents and sister's names changed from one chapter to another. Also, if I'm not mistaken, Kelsey met his parents 2 times for the first time hahahha Just telling so you can correct this part of the story. Thank you for the incredible story. :)

Grabs your attention from the start and holds it.

Intriguing book ......... A must read for everyone

It's a nice story line, but after the first half of the book there are so many mistakes. At some point it seems like the author even forgot the names of the beta and gamma as she only wrote ~b and ~g. Even though she stated that she would edit the book about 3 years ago, nothing seemed to happen!

this book started out good then just died. it's very disappointing. I wish the platform would read and turn down books that aren't well written

B O R I N G.

Story lacks depth and doesn't make sense. Beta's name changed from chapter 1 to 2.