The Assassin and The Alpha Reviews

The story is good

Nice author!

Good story! Needs some serious editing! The chapter “the other lady” is very confusing with the changing of the pronouns from male to female back to male for the same characters.

The second part of the plot has a lot of pronouns errors, mixing of characters and storylines. It’s hard to understand.

Too many language errors and sudden shifts to keep on reading.

Too many errors with pronouns (he/she). Hard to follow story line. Maybe the story didn't translate the right way. The characters were mixed up sometimes. I had to stop reading.

Very confusing story with confusing shifts in each chapter.

I can forgive the translation errors but starting at chapter 68 it's a completely different book and doesn't make any sense.... i think this is only part of a book. I wouldn't waste my time tbh or at least stop at ch 67 so you don't confuse yourself