I do like the overall story line but if the last chapter is the actual ending then that is a lousy way to end the book. Cliff hangers are only good for leading to another book. Where is the second part?
2024-10-16 09:58:48
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Amara Best05
please we need the book two ......
2024-08-29 19:13:09
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hilary knapp
I would really like to read part two book two please
2024-03-04 11:59:26
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Karen L Short
Where is book2?
2023-06-11 21:36:58
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Lisa
I would really love to read book 2 part 2. This is not complete as far as I am concerned. It would be nice to read the rest of it. If this site will not show it where can I read it at?
2023-06-11 16:43:44
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Lisa
Where can I find book two??
2023-01-26 18:43:36
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Anita Crh
I have been enjoying this very much looking forward to the next book!
2022-07-26 17:14:14
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Shannon Patten
This book is good but can use some work on the writing and keeping in the store at hand and not just jump to the next part of the story. I will give a example like when they was in the shower naked then the next second in was in clothes again
2022-08-23 02:02:33
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Slvrdlphn
Dear author, your story has potential but you seriously need a good editor. Often I am unable to keep track of where the scene is going because you tend to jump. I don’t even know if it is the character or you talking. With a lot of clean up this story has the potential to get somewhere.
2022-08-06 13:54:33
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Slvrdlphn
I don’t understand how they’ve supposedly scented each other as mates and then now they can’t? How is Ashley able to hide her scent? Is she part which? This story is so difficult to follow because the author keeps rambling but I am trying to give it a chance hoping it improves.