I feel the ending was rushed although the plot was amazing. There are certain characters not given enough closure
2023-02-04 12:43:15
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Kitty••Kat
91 chapters in and I still don't get what the silvermoon pack situation has anything to do with Ryan and Amelia. it's almost like I'm reading a book with blurps of a different story popping up out of nowhere
2022-09-01 23:59:14
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Jessica L Suddreth
As much as I've enjoyed reading this book about 60% of the way through the story seems to blend with another book. I'd also like to encourage you to find better ways of conveying a point. There are way to many times the language used seems as though a child wrote it.