The Fall Of Alpha Zane Reviews

There were a lot of repeated chapters and it could use some editing and spell checking. Overall I really enjoyed this story. I kind of wish we would have gotten more of a look into Hunter and his mates story. Maybe a little more of Zane and Shirley's story in an epilogue. Very enjoyable story.

Has lots of actions. I love it

captivating! ......

I gave it a 4 because there were too many double chapter. Please revise your book

...wasted sooo much coins 'coz of too many repeated chapters... ...characters come and go leaving more questions... ...story is dragging at the start with very long dialogues, esp with amelia.. then the ending seems rushed... ...still wondering what mission was given by the moon goddess to them...

The writing is a bit all over the place and I hated all of the characters. I gave up early on when the main character was abused then forced and manipulated into forgiving her abuser. Pretty gross.