Cont…My only suggestion is to break up character dialogue and to be consistent. Bro when was deceived with brown hair through earlier chapters than red hair hair through the latter. Heroine is still the victim, so if you want a strong one, you’re gonna have to wait for 50+ chapters to find her…
2022-09-10 14:30:15
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Gordis
Love love love the book!!! Amazing story from beginning to end! Totally recommended it!
2022-09-04 04:09:56
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Abigail
Loved this story!
2022-02-16 11:42:35
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lora.bennett
this was a great hidden gem, I found it by accident and it was amazing, very well written.
2022-02-16 07:06:20
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Morgan Stinson
Such a good book!! I laughed, cried, ugly cried, had happiness, joy and love in my heart! Great job bringing out all of the characters and the story flowed nicely!
2021-10-20 05:14:36
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Pookey
What a great book ! I really enjoyed the story. I laughed,cried and enough got mad. Great job helping me Connect with each character. If you made anymore books like this I’m all in !!
2021-10-16 06:58:58
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Anna Powell
Not something I would normally read, but since I've read some of your other books I had to give it a try. And no surprise, I loved it!! You are simply amazing babe!
2021-10-12 08:07:40
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Adriana Martin
wow so great! couldn't put it down. hope there is a sequel...so good!