Typos are really very turn off for the story especially the wrong names but the story is overall good enough
2023-08-02 03:09:49
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Riz Agabon
this story is amazing
2023-07-01 23:41:16
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Queen Harvey
Nice read, some typos, but easily understood! Great job author!
2022-09-05 04:27:35
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Priti Bhalla
v nice story. so far it's gripping.i like carmans character.she has evolved with time.however she shd tell Marc now about tios paternity. it wil b wrong to hide it til end chapter
2022-08-28 09:14:20
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Sheila
Great story! Loved the lot and the ending!! Thanks so much
2022-08-15 23:11:19
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Suj
Love the story line and they flow. Good job!!! Got me hooked