The Luna's Sacrifice Reviews

I need more please make a second book!!!!!!

Worth every coins. ...

I would love this book, but the pronouns are not correct. They flip for the same characters throughout the whole book. I read to escape, but I have to work hard to keep the characters and events together. If it wasn't 70% off. I would have ditched the book after chapter 1.

I love the storyline, but the book itself is in great need of editing. The pronouns switch throughout the book, sometimes causing confusion as to whom they’re speaking about. Some sections could be made a little more to avoid having to reread to understand what was going on

Its a good story but you really need to proof read and edit your work before submitting it. It's very difficult to differentiate who's talking and who's being talked about. Otherwise it's okay..

Grammar is making it extremely tough to follow. Great story but had to stop reading because it gets too confusing trying to follow the characters. If it gets edited. I'll start reading again.