4th paragraph into the 1st chapter already a mixup of she from of he. I can't imagine what it's going to be like with the rest of 3,678.
2026-02-09 03:28:47
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sefeti adriana
I intended to read this story, but as soon I started, I was thrown back with the grammar. Only the fourth paragraph and the errors started.
2026-02-09 03:25:00
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Reynaldo Landig
Dxisuuuh a a. Xcewo
2025-04-05 13:26:30
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Samuel Melkamu
i like this one but the book it's not finished yet but it says the end i just disappointed i
2023-02-15 00:00:58
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xman
Well no matter how good ML in combat skills, medicine skills etc but once he cheats on his wife, gonna drop this story. Why author makes other women shamelessly wanna grab other woman's husband? Ridiculous. I never support stories with unfaithful ML!