The S-Tier's Omega Bodyguard Reviews

write well. loved the story. hope it continues

Well written book with few exceptions. Writing reflects the considerable thought that went into making character’s emotions feel real. The concern I had was the extended periods of time before new chapters came out. Sometimes as long as a month or more.

Awesome story! How often does the author update? It’s been a week without an update.

so lovely. I love it

Love this book so far! Do you have any idea how many chapters it will be? Great work, can5wait for the next update.

Wow super story author

when I tell you I thoroughly enjoy this book. A nice story and the banter between both characters cheff kiss

love the premise a lot but chapters skip time without any explanation like one sec he’s making coffee the next we are full swing into a sex scene with absolutely no idea how we got there.. lil disappointing if i’m honest good story line just needs checking to make sure it’s flowing correctly

I really wanted to love it, but the inconsistencies in the beginning chapters reek heavily of overuse of AI software to write the novel or an author with a god awful memory. Elliot goes from affable to cruel with no transition. The panic room arc is inconsistent from start to finish. Hire an editor

The chapters First Blood and cold Heart are repeated twice in the chapters titled Penthouse and Bullets