The Unwanted Luna's Secret Rezensionen

I really enjoyed reading this book.

This is a very well thought out short story. I really enjoyed the main characters and the major plot twist never had me confused like a lot of other short stories I've read.

Many mistakes, only a few I couldn’t make out easily.

well, there's no real ending in this story...

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Chapter 4 says she's pregnant with twins and then it changes to 1 child later. That's just one example of a continuity error...

Awful, it has no logical plot. One moment he hates her then he loves her… and then he regrets doing things to her that he would not do if he loved her. And her father is biased and helping the stepsister but his character turns 180 when she’s back? This story will qn your intelligence.