an amazing book by an amazing author. thank you so much for this story!
2025-03-20 06:33:24
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1995dragongirl
I love your story! I couldn't stop reading it! Everything about it had me in the edge of my seat, and I love everything moment of it!
2025-01-31 04:47:51
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Tammy Degitz
The content and story line are good. The issue lies in that, it needs a good edit. It appears to be translated from maybe Spanish. The use of pronouns is not correct. Also, first rule of werewolf novels, it's a pack, not a herd, siblings not brothers, if it was better edited....
2025-01-30 22:57:55
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Derena Marie
the pronouns are all over he/she him/her
2024-09-25 03:55:45
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Arlene Cassidy
***Correction***
I didnt mean to say that, “I have to be rude,” in my last comment. I meant it to say that “I hate to be rude*!” Stupid phone correction!
2024-08-25 12:56:38
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Christine Owings
83 chapters 8/15/24
2024-08-15 21:12:57
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LAUREN
Terrible grammar makes it hard to follow (she/him he/her)