Jumps too much in time and not explaining parts in the middle. Not a good flow.
2023-03-28 12:38:12
4
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Babette Quidley
this book is poorly written
2023-02-22 07:27:00
7
0
Michelle Cornick
great book really enjoyed it
2022-11-16 04:30:56
6
0
Love Arapoc
great book
2022-07-15 04:14:27
1
0
Claudia Mar
Was a good story but kept jumping around. It seemed like it missed a whole chapter or two before the ending. Too many typos. The names kept changing so it was hard to follow.
2023-05-02 05:47:44
2
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Marizon Luna
Reads interesting so far. Good start
2023-02-11 14:53:58
0
0
Shadow
The novel's lack of proofreading significantly detracts from the overall reading experience. Grammatical errors, typos, and inconsistencies, make it difficult at times to fully immerse oneself in the story. These issues can disrupt the flow and require readers to pause and decipher the meaning.
2023-05-24 08:55:59
2
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equus43
Good story until chapter 39. Duplicate chapter to 38 & missing a chapter. Missing chapter or chapters at the end. Big gap in events!!!