Touch Me, Daddy Ulasan

Nice book .

Whiplash, a totally different story pops up out of nowhere. No crossover characters, no continuity in the story line. 2 separate books in 1, unrelated and confusing. 1st one is a great read. Not knowing what was going on, kept reading into 2nd waiting for known characters to show but don’t. Mindf**k

this is sooooooooo goooooddd .........

it is completed with totally wrong story and characters! fix it!

The two stories are nice and entertaining, but the second one has some grammatical errors that makes difficult to understand to what each character is really conveying and referring to.

The storyline changes in the middle of the book..all new characters and a new plot...why?