Velvet Chains Reviews

Does she ever leave the bedroom?

141 chapters 7-21-25

Update please

I love this story very much. It's the one of the best stories I have ever been read.

I'm enjoying the book very much.

Your doing so good dear author....

I love this kind of story ...

First the name of her younger brother was Noah. Suddenly it was Ezra. This book needs some editing (a knock knocking on the door?)

The writing is bad in every chapter. Why change the names. First it was Valerio Moretti. Then it was Valerio de Luca. Read first 20 chapters. There is no plot. Only weird push and pull between Valerio and Sera, bad 50 shades of grey imitation. Not one single decent sentence spoken.

DNF. Only made it to Chp. 19. No consistency in characters names, no plot advancement, same turns-of-phrases overused so much. There are so many editing and grammatical errors, and my god, the infuriating use of asterisks. Seriously, has the author ever had a real human conversation before?