The storyline is quite interesting, although we don't that need the news part so much. The dialogue and the scene is balanced, so far. I mean, it's like 50/50 if I may say. Overall, good. Can't wait for another chapter and cliffhanger 🙈
2021-02-20 10:46:29
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Mk20
Great work Author ?? I'm only few chapters in but already hooked to your story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
2020-11-08 18:53:13
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adwlstr28
Very good story. You should read this :)
2020-11-08 17:43:11
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Viona Xi
Very interesting story because it brought up indonesian language and culture such as Javanese language and Batik. I love it!