By chapter 16 you had the characters names mixed up with the characters names in Devastated. Using some of the same names as the other book causes for your confusion when writing. Even with these issues you have great stories. Look forward to reading others.
2023-01-31 13:33:06
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Anne Sune Maleon
nice..i really love reading it
2021-02-10 07:11:07
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Shivani Jain
love it keep up the good work ❣❣❣❣❣
2020-12-24 04:11:00
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Linda corralejo
I loved this story
2020-11-21 12:23:01
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jasmin jain
wonderful book
2020-11-21 01:43:45
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Pauline Lowry
The only thing I had problems with is calling him a she and some of the spelling. It is a very nice story and I really enjoyed it.
2020-11-15 10:39:05
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Dawn Marie Meece
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good.