So interesting! I hope Macie doesn’t end up with Edward, but with Sean. I think it subverts a lot of the BAD writing in a lot of stories like this— for example, his domestic abuse isn’t brushed aside, she calls the POLICE when his obsessive behavior escalates, etc.
9.5/10
2026-01-09 14:42:39
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fallgillis
update please! great story!
2025-12-07 10:10:13
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NANCY MAINA
Nice read great
2025-12-02 14:48:20
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amour
11-2-25 , 946 chapters
2025-11-03 00:52:44
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Sidney Siqueira
When will Edward get more development? He did make a mistake, but I think it's high time he was given a chance to evolve.
2025-10-04 21:43:40
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Godiva
Dear author,
Please do not abandon this story; it is very interesting. Sharon needs to be captured and held accountable for her evil deeds just like Raymond.
I do feel sorry for Edward knowing how repentant he is for his past ill treatment of Macie, but he has to bear the consequences.
2025-09-24 20:48:53
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Sidney Siqueira
I think it's funny how the Hales blame Edward for everything when they themselves were protecting Sharon from everything, including treating Macie as if she were just anyone.
2025-09-05 21:23:14
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Linda
Great story line. The good, the bad and the ugly! Just need to see the love come back to those who are still emotionally invested. Macie and Edward needs to reunite! Big beautiful wedding!
2025-08-30 00:31:56
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Cynthia
This a great reader. I wish for more chapters to be put in it. I have been reading this for a while and now right in the good part of it there have been more chapters. It is really is terrible. Please put more chapters to fish the book.