It’s very confusing. I think the author should read the chapters before posting them. Would probably get a three star but right now it’s not getting any stars. I’m sorry Author. I felt it is rushed and not thought through properly. Difficult to understand
2023-06-02 23:44:39
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Delinda Schumacher
51 chapters 4-5-23
2023-04-05 22:09:08
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Ms. Supernatural
Dear Author Sunshine,
I found your concept to the story good. Unfortunately, the paragraphs and chapters are so jumbled, making the story very confusing. My advice to you is to proofread each chapter before posting. Don’t give up on your writing! You’ll get better with more practice!
2024-09-28 11:41:17
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Gina
Might be a good story, but too hard to read with the grammatical errors.
2023-12-28 12:10:57
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Linda
Very difficult to read author needs to proofread and correct errors
2023-06-30 06:30:33
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Maria S
Needs to be proofread
2023-05-10 11:06:08
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Angela Blackwell
same book on Reddit app but called it's called bruised I know because I read this on readdict all that is different is the names were changed and more chapters added to mame it seem different.i went back and forth just now same story
2023-10-21 01:03:04
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Lola Li
the story might be interesting, but its really difficult to read and understand. needs to be proofread