When Do Writers Let Protagonists Talk Nonsense For Suspense?

2025-09-02 13:31:57 139

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Neil
Neil
2025-09-06 08:05:29
There are moments in stories when a protagonist babbles, lies, or slips into half-coherent rambling, and honestly, I love the messy beauty of it. For me, it signals a writer planting questions: Is this person hiding something? Are they confused, lying, or being gaslit? Letting a character talk nonsense can be a deliberate curtain to obscure a later reveal, or it can be a crash test that shows the reader how fragile the narrator's mind is. I’ve felt that excited prickly feeling reading 'Mr. Robot' scenes where Elliot’s internal chaos leaks into speech — it creates an uneasy intimacy that makes every revelation land harder.

Another reason writers lean into nonsense is to control pacing and tone. A string of cryptic lines, non sequiturs, or outright contradictions drags time out, stretches suspense, and makes readers linger on small details. In 'Memento' the fractured recollections aren’t just gimmicks; they force you to experience confusion alongside the protagonist. Sometimes the nonsense is comedic misdirection — think unreliable boasting or drunk rambling — which relaxes readers' guard so a twist can sting more later.

I also notice nonsense used to develop voice. Characters who babble reveal culture, education, trauma, or mood through the way they fail to make sense. It’s a risky tool: when done right it deepens empathy and ratchets suspense; when done poorly it feels like filler. Personally, I like it when the nonsense keeps me guessing long enough that the eventual clarity feels earned, like solving a puzzle you were almost too tired to finish.
Faith
Faith
2025-09-07 10:14:06
I like seeing protagonists talk nonsense when the story needs to blur truth and perception — it’s like being given a map drawn in a different hand. When authors do this, they’re often signaling unreliable narration, memory gaps, or deliberate misdirection. Works like 'Memento' and 'Mr. Robot' use incoherent speech to make the reader experience confusion as the character does, which creates suspense by making every line suspect.

Nonsense can also be a texture for voice: some characters simply think or speak in fragments, and that rhythm keeps you off-balance. There’s a wider trick too — by letting a character ramble, writers can hide crucial facts in the noise; later, when those facts resurface, the reveal feels earned because you remember the odd line that once seemed meaningless. Personally, I find this technique thrilling when it connects to character stakes rather than just being clever for cleverness’ sake, and I enjoy hunting through the clutter for the signal beneath the static.
Eva
Eva
2025-09-08 20:38:11
Okay, picture this: a protagonist going on and on about things that don’t logically connect, and my brain scrambles in the best way. I get a teenage-gamer vibe reading those moments — they’re loud, impulsive, and full of half-truths. Writers use that chaos to make you doubt the narrator and to sprinkle red herrings. In 'Fight Club' and 'Gone Girl' the unreliable bits are like breadcrumbs that look like the main trail but actually lead you in circles.

Another angle is the emotional cue. Nonsense often crops up when a character’s under stress, grief, or adrenaline; it’s not just for plot, it’s for empathy. When someone starts talking nonsense after a shock, you feel their disorientation physically. I notice it a lot in thrillers and noir: it keeps the atmosphere taut. It’s also a neat way to show, rather than tell, that trust is broken — if you can’t take the narrator at their word, every sentence becomes a puzzle piece.

If you're writing or reading, watch for patterns: repeated phrases, slips in logic, sudden topic changes. Those usually mean the author wants you to slow down and suspect something. Sometimes it’s a misdirection; sometimes it’s the first sign that the narrator’s memory or sanity is compromised. Either way, it’s a craft move worth savoring.
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