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ALMOST PERFECT
ALMOST PERFECT
Author: Teena Chans

CHAPTER 1: THE SCENT OF RAIN AND DENIAL

Author: Teena Chans
last update Last Updated: 2026-01-04 16:16:27

Maplewood was a neighborhood stitched together by ancient oaks and the quiet hum of suburban life, where secrets were as common as hydrangeas in June. It was here, on a street that smelled like coffee that Lisa Chen first saw Greyson Vale. The encounter happened on a Tuesday, under a sky bruised purple with the promise of rain. Lisa was wrestling a rebellious grocery bag, its plastic handle biting into her palm, when she turned the corner and collided—not physically, but with the full, disorienting force of his presence— a man who seemed carved from the very storm clouds gathering overhead.

He was leaning against the wrought-iron fence of the old Victorian house at number 42, a cigarette dangling from his long fingers, though he wasn’t smoking it. His eyes, the colour of wet slate, were fixed on the horizon, lost in a thought so deep it seemed to pull the world into its gravity. He wore a simple white t-shirt that clung to the hard lines of his torso, and his dark hair was tousled by the wind, giving him an air of careless elegance that was both infuriating and magnetic.

Lisa’s breath hitched, a tiny, traitorous sound in the quiet street. Her heart, usually a reliable metronome, began a frantic, syncopated rhythm against her ribs. It was a feeling so profound, so terrifyingly absolute, that her immediate reaction was to deny it with every fibre of her being.

"Don’t be ridiculous", she scolded herself, forcing her gaze away and marching towards her own modest bungalow two doors down. He’s just a man. A brooding, arrogant-looking stranger.

Yet, for the next three weeks, their paths crossed with an almost supernatural frequency. They’d meet at the mailbox at the exact same time, their hands brushing over a stack of bills and flyers, sending electric jolts up their arms. They’d pass each other on their evening walks, their eyes locking for a fraction of a second before both would look away, their cheeks burning with a heat that had nothing to do with the summer sun.

Their interactions were a masterclass in mutual denial. They spoke in clipped sentences. He’d comment on her choice of literature—“Ayn Rand? Seriously?”—and she’d retort about his apparent addiction to black coffee—“Trying to dissolve your insides, or just your soul?”

But their bodies betrayed them. The way his hand would linger a moment too long when handing her a dropped pen. The way her voice would soften, losing its sharp edge, when asking him to keep an eye on her cat while she was away. They were two magnets with their poles reversed, pushing away with all their might while being inexorably drawn together.

Lisa worked as a freelance graphic designer from home, and she found herself glancing out her window more often than she cared to admit, hoping to catch a glimpse of him returning from work. Grey, an architect known for his minimalist, emotionally resonant designs, had moved to Maplewood seeking quiet after a high-profile project in Chicago ended in professional controversy. He told no one this, of course. To the neighborhood, he was simply the handsome, quiet man at number 42.

One afternoon, Lisa spotted him struggling with a heavy box of drafting supplies on his porch. Without thinking, she walked over. “Need a hand?” she asked, her voice casual, though her pulse thundered in her ears.

He looked up, surprised, then nodded curtly. Together, they carried the box inside. His living room was sparse but elegant—clean lines, warm wood, a single abstract painting on the wall. It felt like an extension of him: controlled, intelligent, and deeply private.

“Thanks,” he said, not meeting her eyes.

“No problem,” she replied, already backing toward the door. But then she paused. “You know… you don’t have to be so guarded all the time.”

His head snapped up. For a moment, something raw flickered in his expression—vulnerability, perhaps, or recognition. But it vanished as quickly as it came. “Some walls are necessary,” he said quietly.

The tension finally snapped one sweltering August night. A sudden thunderstorm had rolled in, turning the street into a river of reflected streetlights. Lisa, caught without an umbrella, was dashing home from the library, her thin cotton dress plastered to her skin, her hair a wild, dark halo around her face. She saw him on his porch, watching the rain with that same distant expression.

“Need a ride?” he called out, his voice rough, cutting through the drumming rain.

“No,” she shouted back, her voice trembling not from the cold. “I’m fine.”

“You’re soaked.”

“I prefer my dignity to your charity.”

He laughed then, a low, rich sound that vibrated in her chest.

He walked down the steps, holding a large black umbrella over both of them. They stood there, inches apart, the space between them crackling with the unsaid. Rainwater dripped from his hair onto his collarbone, tracing a path down his neck. She could smell the clean, masculine scent of his soap mixed with the petrichor rising from the earth.

“Why do you fight this so hard, Lisa?” he asked, his voice barely a whisper now, his slate-grey eyes searching hers.

She looked up at him, her own defences crumbling like wet sand. “Because it feels like falling,” she admitted, her voice raw. “And I’m terrified of the landing.” She gave a drowning stare.

He didn’t answer with words. He answered by closing the distance between them, his lips finding hers in a kiss that was both a question and an answer, a surrender and a conquest. It was a kiss that tasted of rain and longing, of three weeks of stolen glances. In that moment, under the shelter of his umbrella, the world outside Maplewood ceased to exist. There was only the heat of his mouth, the strength of his arms pulling her close, and the dizzying realization that they were both already lost.

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