Story ends with several cliffhangers and no ending….Writer hasn’t responded to others comments about a part 2???
2023-08-25 23:49:01
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GrahamCracker Krunch
And 42 is a repeat it would not be so bad if the 43 was 42 but it's not I really like your book but this is too much the story dose not flow because of this. Can you fix it? Will you fix it? Are you even looking at the comments under your story? I hope so cause again I really enjoy this
2023-02-18 14:54:54
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GrahamCracker Krunch
Where is chapter 10
2023-02-17 09:25:38
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kelly jeffrey
what is the update schedule for this book? I don't invest if not daily updates.
2023-02-09 17:22:32
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maxeiner1
when are you updating?
2023-02-05 12:16:39
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rokeebat
Very interesting and good novel highly recommended but is that all what will happen next? Is there going to be an abortion or permanent solution? Don't tell me it has to end there? What if his brother is lying? Can you update pls
2023-08-26 03:39:32
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Shannon D
The grammar is off constantly and Chapter 10 is a repeat, but I enjoyed the book even with the flaws, but hate how it ended without an answer and nothing about a second book.
2023-05-08 18:27:25
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Kaddy Songbird Chosen
Call me alpha was phenomenal. not sure what's happening here, especially the ending
2023-03-15 09:44:11
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GrahamCracker Krunch
again hope this gets fixed
2023-02-18 14:55:37
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Kathryn
The book is not finished even though it says complete. Chapter 73 in no way finishes their story.