A tattoo—small but intricate—etched just below my skin. The infinity symbol, its delicate lines looping and intertwining seamlessly, radiated a sense of endless continuity. It was beautiful but haunting. A chill ran down my spine as I lightly traced the design with my fingers. My skin tingled at the touch, as if the mark carried some latent energy.
“Why do I have the same tattoo as the young boy’s mom?” I whispered under my breath. My voice sounded foreign, trembling with a mix of disbelief and fear. Gently, I pressed the area around the mark, hoping for some kind of answer, but all I got was silence and the faint hum of the morning. Anxiety bubbled inside me. Was this some bizarre coincidence, or was there something more sinister at play? The memory of the boy’s mother flashed through my mind. Her smile had been kind, yet there was something about her presence that had lingered, like a shadow that refused to fade.
The sound of my door slamming open shattered my thoughts.
“Anne!” my youngest brother, Helix, burst into the room, his energy hitting me like a tidal wave. He was dressed in his usual chaos—an oversized hoodie, mismatched socks, and his ever-present mischievous grin. His brown hair stuck up in unruly tufts, and his ash-gray eyes sparkled with humor. “Wow, you look like crap,” he said, crossing his arms and leaning against the doorframe like a little prince surveying his kingdom.
I glared at him. “Thanks for the confidence boost, Helix. Really needed that.”
He shrugged, unbothered by my sarcasm. “Just saying. You look like you wrestled a bear in your sleep and lost. I could draw it for you if you want—illustrate the epic battle.”
I rolled my eyes, pushing him toward the door. “Out. Now.”
“Fine, fine,” he said, laughing as he backed out. “You’re no fun.” His laugh was infectious, and I found myself smiling despite the knot of worry in my chest. Helix had always been the troublemaker in our family. Growing up, he lived to prank us—switching my shampoo for glitter, replacing my alarm tone with a screaming goat, or hiding my homework. Yet, in his own way, he had a knack for making even the darkest days feel lighter.
Before I could shut the door, Henry, our middle brother, appeared, his posture stiff and composed as always. His jet-black hair was combed back perfectly, and his sharp, dark eyes scanned the scene dispassionately. “The average recommended sleep for teenagers is eight to ten hours per night,” he said without preamble. “You’re clearly not meeting that benchmark, Anne.”
“Thanks, Henry,” I said dryly. “Did you come all the way here just to tell me I look tired?”
“Yes,” he replied, completely serious. “You’re welcome.”
“What’s going on?” Allyson’s groggy voice joined the fray. She shuffled down the hallway, rubbing her ash-blue eyes. Her silver hair was a tangled mess, and her usually calm expression was marred by a sleepy frown. As the eldest, she was often the mediator of our chaos, the one who kept us from killing each other.
“Nothing important,” I snapped, stepping back into my room and shutting the door. I wasn’t in the mood to entertain my siblings’ banter, not with the tattoo burning in my thoughts. Their voices faded as I moved around the room, gathering my things for school. The mark on my shoulder remained a constant weight on my mind, its presence unnervingly familiar and utterly alien at the same time.
Downstairs, breakfast was its usual solemn affair. My father sat at the head of the table, his long black hair tied back neatly. His muscular build and stern demeanor radiated authority, though his eyes rarely met ours. Across from him, my mother sipped her tea, her ash-blond hair pulled into a flawless bun. She wore the same distant expression she always had, as if her mind was somewhere else entirely.
We didn’t talk much during meals. It wasn’t that they were cruel or demanding; they just didn’t ask questions. They never pressured us about grades or interrogated us about our lives. But they also didn’t know about the secrets we kept, the things we’d endured, or the truths we’d discovered. And deep down, I doubted they’d want to know.
I ate quickly, my thoughts preoccupied with the tattoo. It loomed in my mind, an enigma I couldn’t escape. By the time I left the house, I was practically vibrating with unease.
The train station was unusually quiet. The usual chatter of morning commuters was muted, replaced by an eerie stillness. I stepped onto the train and immediately noticed something was off. The car was empty—completely empty. The usual crush of bodies and muffled conversations was gone, leaving only silence and flickering overhead lights.
I slid into a seat, clutching my bag tightly. My eyes darted around, scanning the shadows for any sign of life. The emptiness pressed down on me, making it hard to breathe. Then, at the far end of the car, I spotted a familiar figure. Dale.
Dale is like the school's heartthrob, catching every girl's eye with his tall frame, fair skin, captivating eyes, smooth voice, and physique that could make anyone do a double take. But, just to be clear, that doesn't include me. Now, I'm bringing up Dale because every girl falling for his charm becomes my sworn enemy. Dale and I go way back, not in a romantic way, though. We're neighbors, classmates, and childhood buddies, I guess. It's hard to put a label on what Dale and I are. And it's weird; whenever I'm in trouble, he shows up like my personal superhero, saves the day, and then ghosts me like it's no big deal. Besides those random heroic moments, we don't talk much.
“Mmm, this is awkward,” I muttered, sneaking a glance at him. He had his headphones on, bobbing his head to a beat I couldn’t hear.
I considered waving, but before I could, the train lurched to a stop, and the lights flickered ominously. A chill crept over me as a cloaked figure appeared at the far end of the car.
My breath hitched. The figure’s movements were slow but deliberate, each step echoing like a death knell. My pulse thundered in my ears as I instinctively moved back. Dale, noticing my distress, grabbed my arm and pulled me behind him.
The air grew thick, and glittering dust began to swirl around us. My eyelids grew heavy, the world tilting as the figure raised an arm.
The last thing I saw before darkness consumed me was Dale’s protective stance, his broad shoulders shielding me.
I woke to the sharp sting of a book smacking my head.
"Anne!" my teacher’s voice snapped. "See me in my office after class."
I blinked, disoriented, finding myself back in the classroom. My heart raced as I tried to process what had happened. Was it all a dream? My skin felt clammy, and my limbs were heavy, as though I’d run a marathon.
Across the room, Dale sat at his desk, calm and focused, as though nothing had happened.
As I gathered my things, the memory of the cloaked figure lingered, vivid and unsettling. Was it just a dream, or something more?
Here's the revised version of *Anne and the Hidden World*. I hope you enjoy it! 😊
“Go back! Please, go back!” I screamed through tears, my voice raw with panic. Tears blurred my vision as I clutched falcon’s feathers, fingers stiff and shaking. The air howled in my ears, drowning my words. falcon didn’t even falter. We kept flying, the battlefield shrinking behind us until it was just a smear of lightning and smoke.We landed hard in front of Harold’s house. Rain hit like needles, cold and relentless. I slid off Falcon’s back, soaked through in seconds, boots splashing in the mud. My teeth chattered, but my thoughts burned.Mom was already rushing toward me. Her arms opened, trembling. “Anne, it’s okay. Come here.”I didn’t move.“Anne,” she said again, stepping closer, her voice fragile. She reached out and grabbed my wrist gently, like touching a soap bubble that might burst.Her touch hurt. It was too soft, too familiar, too safe.“No!” I tore my arm away and stumbled backward. Then I ran.The storm raged all around, but I pushed through it, sprinting toward whe
Days blurred into months, slipping through my fingers like grains of sand. Before I knew it, every last piece of our old life had been packed into boxes, labeled in my mother’s neat, tight script, and shipped to Harold’s home. Only the essentials made the journey—clothes, important documents, school supplies, and the photo albums that held the only tangible proof of what once was. Everything else, every little thing that made our house a home, was left behind.At first, my parents had been reluctant. They wrapped their concern in clipped words and tight-lipped glances, refusing to grant us even the smallest sliver of freedom in this unfamiliar town. But Sheriff Donovan had a way with persuasion, a patience that whittled down their resistance until, eventually, they relented.I had expected them to hold on longer, to clutch us tighter, their desperation forming an iron cage around us. But maybe, deep down, they realized the truth—no matter how hard they tried, they couldn’t keep us loc
“How did you know me?” I asked again, my eyes narrowing as I scrutinized the man before me. His expression was calm, his movements deliberate as he approached.“Harold already informed us about you,” he said, his voice steady, betraying no emotion. “What are you doing here?”I tensed, my fingers curling into fists at my sides. Before I could respond, a familiar voice rang out from behind him. “You don’t need to keep your guard up with him.”I turned swiftly, relief and confusion mixing in my chest as I saw my master. “Master? What are you doing here? How did you know I was here?”“Because of him,” Master replied, pointing to a figure sprinting toward us. His hair was a fiery red, his eyes sharp and cunning like a fox’s. My heart lurched. It was Red.The world seemed to blur as I stood there, frozen. Then, without thinking, I found myself running toward him. Tears blurred my vision as I threw my arms around him, holding him tight. “Thank you… Thank you for being alive,” I whispered, my
“Therefore, we can conclude that Harold and Eli are our grandparents,” Henry declared, his voice steady yet laden with a gravity that resonated through the room like the toll of a distant bell.The room fell into a stunned silence. It was the kind of silence that seemed to expand, pressing against the walls, heavy with the weight of the revelation. I exchanged a glance with Allyson, her brow furrowed in concern, a mirror to the apprehension churning in my chest.Helix shifted uneasily, breaking the stillness with a cough. “By the way,” he ventured, his voice slicing through the tension like a dull knife, “where’s Master?”Allyson straightened in her chair, brushing a strand of silver hair behind her ear. Her voice was taut with worry. “She’s with the Red Foxes,” she replied, “but... I haven’t heard from her yet.”Henry’s words lingered in the air, casting long shadows over the afternoon. Conversation waned, the heavy Victorian walls of the house seeming to absorb our unease. Its khaki
My mother stiffened, her fingers tightening around the edge of my bed. Her knuckles turned white as she gripped the wooden frame, her body visibly tensing. “What do you mean?” she asked, her voice brittle as dry leaves. Her eyes darted toward Savienne, searching for something, anything, that might soften the blow of what she had just heard. “We can’t just—”“What do you mean, Savienne?” My father’s voice thundered over hers, cutting through the tense air like a blade. He stepped forward, his towering frame dominating the small hospital room. His fists were clenched so tightly that his knuckles had gone pale. “You can’t drop a bomb like that and expect us to just accept it!” His voice cracked with fury, but there was something else—something raw—lurking beneath the surface. Fear?Savienne didn’t flinch. She turned to face him fully, her silver hair catching the harsh fluorescent light. Her steely gaze bore into his, unyielding. “She’s been marked,” she said, her tone sharp and matter-o
The darkness pressed in like a suffocating shroud, wrapping around me with an almost tangible weight. Each step forward felt like wading through thick, invisible sludge. My legs trembled, threatening to give way as the void stretched endlessly in every direction. My breath came in ragged gasps, loud in the oppressive silence, my heartbeat a frantic drumbeat echoing in my ears.I tried to call out, but my voice faltered, strangled by some unseen force. A choking panic bubbled in my throat, clawing to get out. That’s when the voice came. “It’s all your fault!” The words hit me like a blade to the chest, sharp and cold. I froze, spinning around wildly. My eyes darted through the inky blackness, desperate to find the source. “Who’s there?” I managed to croak, my voice barely audible. Silence. Then, the voice erupted again, harsher, angrier. “We know you called them! That’s why we died, you hypocrite!” It was Leo. His voice was unmistakable, and suddenly, he was there—standing befor