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The Breaking Point

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The white swallowed everything. Not like light—like the absence of color, of texture, of boundary. Eliana hung in it, neither floating nor falling, suspended in the space between moments. She could feel the warmth of her brother’s hand still pressed against her palm, but when she tried to squeeze, there was nothing there. Only the memory of warmth, and the faint, fading echo of his voice saying, *I’m here. I’m not lost anymore.*

She tried to breathe, but her lungs felt wrong—too large, too empt
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    The white swallowed everything. Not like light—like the absence of color, of texture, of boundary. Eliana hung in it, neither floating nor falling, suspended in the space between moments. She could feel the warmth of her brother’s hand still pressed against her palm, but when she tried to squeeze, there was nothing there. Only the memory of warmth, and the faint, fading echo of his voice saying, *I’m here. I’m not lost anymore.*She tried to breathe, but her lungs felt wrong—too large, too empty, as if they were trying to draw in something that wasn’t air. She tried to scream, but the sound dissolved in the white before it could reach her own ears. She was alone. Not the solitude of a quiet room, or the loneliness of a crowded street, but the absolute, crushing isolation of a soul untethered from its body, from its purpose, from its place in the world.*No.*She wouldn’t accept it. She had fought through the Field of Echoes, through the Glass Room, through the Memory Court, through th

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