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DEOS III

‘’Get me out of here!’’

‘’Get me out of here!’’

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A small and earie voice sounded from an orb, lifeless in appearance but is really embedded with life and soul, engulfed in the rocky ground. Crying from its core and all power, yet no one hears it. Shouting and shouting, as if its voice won’t ever wither. Trying and trying, wishing for someone to notice it.

‘’ I’m sick of this form!’’

‘’I got to make someone carry me to my father’’

It was there covered by a pile of rocks, unable to move or do anything, trapped in a motionless body for number of years.

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But then, suddenly, the person inside the orb sees a very familiar scenario…  -The distortion.

This happened the very same time when Lux showed Niru the distortion.

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Seventh page of DEOS- Imimu-Zaru erial Evko (title of the page)

Lux fierre Critsia did everything that the Creator has told him so, the authority over every mortal being and the right to name every creation was bestowed to him.

He accepted this power to rule in all earnest and founded the first civilization.

The creator modelled humans in the image of the first, Lux fierre- Embedded with emotions, soul and ego, they are gifted with absolute free will, but only one is special to Lux, Imimu-Zaru, which he calls his son.

Imimu-Zaru is created from a portion of Lux fierre, from the part of beingness called ‘’the mind’’- He is the memory bearer of Lux fierre.

Everything that has happen before times are stored inside him- The urn of the history, through him and his hands, the content of DEOS are written.

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People have marched over to the cliff of Atla, carrying a clay pot container full of rocks in all shapes, but something in it is different, a distinct rock, glowing in an unusual color. It was the mysterious orb that were crying aloud so someone will notice it and bring it to some place. It took form of a regular rock so people won’t find it scary and pick it up.

Because of the distortion that was triggered by Lux, the orb was able to use a glimpse of its power. It used its voice to control a person that was just passing by, to report an unlawful act, that someone has entered the forbidden place- The devoted people immediately took action and patrolled there to check if the reports were true.

The distortion also made it possible for it to turn into a rock.

Ranhtik ali, deniha and Naran , are siblings and devotees of the Most Supreme, the Creator. They were assigned to be the carriers of the rock container, they came along with the marching people to the cliff of Atla, so they can personally take part in the punishment that will be given to the sinner who has set foot on the cliff.

‘’Finally.’’

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‘’Whose voice is that?’

‘’Did you hear that, Deniha?’’

‘’What voice?’’

‘’no-nothing…’’

While the three of them at the back of the line are walking, Naran heard a small voice from the container of rocks, putting it down to check it and quickly notices the strangely appearing rock.

‘’What is this thing?’’

‘’Naran, what are you doing, let’s get going.’’

‘’ahh… yes…’’

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After they reach the point that can visibly see the ledges of Atla, they run toward and threw rocks at Niru. Even though they throw at him with all their might and power, not a single rock hit him. But they did not stop anyway.

Naran, is stunned for he is in front of a bizarre view- the unearthly and terrifying occurrence called the distortion, he flinched and fell on the ground. He was so terrified that he can’t move an inch.

A godly being is there levitated in the air and all their rocks are fended off by that someone- It was Lux who is protecting Niru that time. Naran thought that the being who is protecting the sinner who have entered the cliff were the Creator himself.

‘’ Is that the Creator?’’

Naran also noticed Niru there by the ledge of the cliff.

‘’Niru? Niru was it you? Why are y-“

And by Naran’s side, the strange rock is growing more vibrant, its color radiates stronger, he slowly moved his head to check it but it flashed his eyes off.

He ran away face downward, covering his eyes burnt in pain and hid in a boulder near to him.

‘’All of you go back and forget everything that you saw.’’

‘’That voice again’’

Naran, who is tearing his eyes in pain, continued to observe at the back of a boulder. He is raveled in a mind twisting mystery, what he has seen is something beyond reality, everything seems off afar from each other, like the earth is broken in fragments and they are all floating in a vast space.

‘’What is happening?’’

It all suddenly came back to what it should be, the people are going back like nothing happened, clueless to what they were doing back there- It was the person inside the orb who commanded the people to go back and not Niru.

‘’You, the one who summoned this distortion, I must thank you for doing that. Go rest.’’

Ranhtik ali and Deniha noticed that Naran went missing and tried to find him.

‘’Why are they going back?’’

Naran sees Ranhtik Ali and Deniha but he hid himself from them so he could stay and observe around the area.

It seems that only Naran is the only one who isn’t oblivious to the distortion.

He stayed and did not come back along his brothers.

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‘’Sleep! My beloved father.’’

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After the people were already gone, he came out of the boulder he was hiding in and saw the great and powerful being fall on ground, unconscious, the mysterious stone is also there. He approached Lux and noticed Niru lying in the ground too so he helped the both of them.

‘’what should I do… what should I do.’’

‘’If this is really the Creator and If i ignored him, I’ll be doomed.’’

‘’This lowly creature…. He can see my father, Lux?’’

The person inside the orb had a fond of interest to Naran.

Because the effects of distortion already wore off, Naran did not hear any word from the rock-life object.

‘’Who is this man? He heard me twice earlier.’’

‘’I guess many have happen while I was asleep in this form.’’

‘’Now, how do I wake him up… I can’t even summon the distortion.’’

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Naran, trembling in fear, he can’t think of a way to help lux and Niru, he wet himself in sweat, nervous that he may harm the Creator, or curse himself- He mistook Lux as the Creator.

He can’t even lay a finger to Lux thinking that he isn’t worthy to touch him.

‘’Should I wake Niru first?’’

‘’He looks different than before... and more beautiful…’’

‘’What do I do now…’’

Naran slowly moved his face to Niru and blushed, but he accidentally lost his balance.

He fell on Niru’s body, then suddenly… A loud noise sounded to Naran’s ear.

~GRRRRRRR! -The growl of a hungry stomach.

‘’AAaaaaa!’’

He screamed in pain.

‘’The pain is back! The pain is b-… Wait what happened… Naran? Why are you here?’’

Naran is in a shock after Niru woke up, that his body froze, he can’t move- also because of what he tried to do to Niru while he was unconscious.

‘’Father!’’

Niru calls for his father and Lux immediately wakes up after hearing his voice.

‘’What happened.’’

‘’I have a feeling of hunch to what have happened here, but let’s help my father first before everything else.’’

‘’uhh, yes, sorry, Niru’’

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‘’That person’s name is Niru? Father protected him earlier, he must be a special being like me…’’

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‘’If only you could just forgive me and my sins, father…’’

‘’I wouldn’t have to erase a portion of your memory.’’

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‘’Father is sick.’’

‘’Father? Him? Your father?’’

‘’Yes, I don’t have time to explain, but he is my father, he told me that something is happening to him, I have to help him.’’

‘’We have to find the temple of Axis libru.’’

‘’What is that?... Aksis? Libru?’’

‘’We are running out of time. I have to go there.’’

‘’Wait let me help you, I’ll join you.’’

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Eighth page of DEOS- Sola

After the creation of the first being, The Creator crafted an immense sphere of warm element called Sola and placed it to his vastest domain called the space. After that a great expanse of vegetation started to sprout in earth, as nourishment to every critter that exists in this world, a gift from the Highest.

The Great Creator placed his grand throne right at the top of the earth where his people are making a home, at the middle of Atla and Miragin, where these two high points of earth meets.

A life in utter beauty and solace, it is the divine plan for His subjects, and they praise Him for His greatness and power.

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Just like that, Naran who’s just there to see the punishment for the sinner who entered the forbidden cliff, Atla, is about to take a long journey to the temple of Axis libru- Although Niru doesn’t know anything of its whereabout, Lux told him a very important detail.

DEOS III- END

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