Hey everyone!, how are you all doing?. I want to start off by appreciating you all, I'm so grateful for the kind readers i've built here on goodnovel, grateful for all three thousand of you who decided to give this book a chance and have stuck with me since.
Since the first day this book aired on this platform, a year ago, to now, i've evolved as a writer and the course of the book has changed quite a number of times over the months.
I set out to entertain people with my writing, that has not changed, what has, however, is my style, the story telling, the story setting, the character developments and so on. I never intended for the book to be a hundred chapters long, believe me, so i realized it was dragging out, taking too long and i had to do something about it.
My point is, this book has since, underwent, and still is undergoing massive changes, restructuring and editing. Not because the way it now is wrong, but there is room for improvement. I have since attended a formal writing academy here on goodnovel and my eyes have been opened to a lot of loopholes in the book.
So, YES!, you read right, Busted is no longer Busted!.
The story line remains, with a few changes here and there, and a few supporting characters shed off, and new ones introduced. Like i said, this book is to entertain, so if anything, it is more entertaining.
And of course, yours truly received a letter of recommendation for this book to apply for an exclusive contract. So to meet criteria for this contract a lot of things are changing, but for good, i must add. The title is changing, the cover, the introduction and a little tweaks in the back stories of both female lead and male lead/love interest.
I still don't know how this is going to change the coin charges for each chapter, but this is me telling you to keep an open mind. I'm sure there shouldn't be any big changes and if there is, it'd be minimal.
This is not to scare you all, i promise, Professor Maxwell is still professor Maxwell, but rebranded with more unique characteristics, Breanna is still Breanna but with a little edge to her, more sassiness and more drama in total.
I hope y'all stick around for what's to come, i promise you will not be disappointed.
*Edited : The new first chapter is up, go check it out!.
*The book name will officially change in a few hours, brace yourselves!. The rewritten first three chapters are live, i hope you like it.
I have updated and edited till chapter six every one. SO if you're not new here, kindly go back up. Sorry for any inconvenience it might cause.
As you might have noticed, the title and book cover have changed, what are your thoughts?.
LOVE,
BEE
Hola again! How are you all doing?. As some already know, if you don't, well.......now you'll know, this book has / is going through massive editing. The book cover and title has changed, the story line has been tweaked ( i say tweaked, because the main characters are still the same but with minor personality changes and how the story unfolds has improved *in my opinion ) SO the first TEN chapter have been thoroughly edited. The chapters that follow are still of the previous version of the book. I didn't want to delete the entire book and replace it in one go, it wouldn't be unfair to all those that have spent coins to unlock. I do hope that this does not confuse you too much, i know its not convenient, so i try to post messages in the reviews section about the chapters that have been edited. If you were a previous reader and didn't know, kindly go back up and see the changes, i hope you love them!. I'll most probably keep coming here to edit this Author's note with almos
Heeeellooooooo!! What's up everyone?, how are we all doing?. There is actually no need for this update, if you have been following up on all the edits that has been happening, then you know what's up!. For those who don't know, a little introduction. This book was previously name Busted. Now its not. This book is under edit. So although i've left this two author notes before this, explaining, some new readers still don't know, which is fine. So i've added a small note to the end of the synopsis that the book is in edit. I try to post an announcement, (if you will), in the reviews section on the chapters that have been edited, but that's not very frequent. To identify, there is a new trend of chapter headings, that i know its obvious, but let me still point it out. The numbered chapters have been edited, the unumbered, have not. The chapter names are now a pair of two words only, unlike the previous unspecified one. I've also added an " * Edited " warning at the begin
Hey, hey! Happy halloween!. So as usual, there isn't a specific reason for this update, but i just think its due. If you're new, welcome.... this book is being edited. Live. That means, there are edited chapters and some arent. It wouldn't be so much trouble if the editing is just grammer........but when i say edit, i mean the story line is being edited too. As of when i'm writing this, forty-seven chapters have been edited. But the rest that follow aren't. For new readers, that can be confusing. How do you know which chapter are edited, you may ask?. So you'll know which chapter to read first...... Every edited chapter is numbered. So if you see a number in the chapter title, its edited and you can read. All edited chapters have an *Edited tag at the very top and some times a trigger warning, so once you see it, you know its edited. Edited chapters are all written in third person narrative with respect to prespective...........that means, in my narrative (past partcic
*Edited Breanna's POV "We were four girls, they took us that night in a huge van." Tiana spoke in the darkness. Breanna couldn't make out her face, but her voice was tight, like she was still crying. "Daisy and I were awake, she struggled to fight them, screaming all the way, till they decided to beat her to a pulp." She took another pause, breathing heavily as the memories came to her, Breanna assumed. Daisy, was not at all an easy person. She was one of the very few people that hated to breath in the same air that Breanna did. She almost wasn't sorry for her, until Tiana got into the details. "For the first few months, they only just left us to rot, this is the sixth basement I've lived in and the best so far, trust me." Her voice darkens. "This is deluxe treatment, so I think you're either a big deal or you are connected to one, cos you're apparently worth it." She swallowed, but Breanna was still hung up on her previous statement. "Daisy, as in Daisy- the wild witch?." She
*Edited Max's POV "They'll find her, don't worry." Martha said over the phone. Petra had called her after he barged into her office yet again. It was crazy how involved they were in his life. It made him realize how much of a fool he had been all these years, thinking that he was ever alone, they had always been there. His overbearing mother - Helen, his passionate sister - Martha, his intuitive friend - Petra. A friend indeed; she had proved herself, maybe because she also blamed herself for what happened with Sloane, because the crazed woman was her half-long-distance cousin. Sloane!. He gritted his teeth. It took everything in him not to throw her a punch that night. Not able believe she drugged him, after he allowed her in, trusted her, like a fool, again, as always was when it came to her. He had been clean for years, till that night, he wasn't really stoned or high but it made him drowsy, so when she started removing his clothes, he couldn't push her off, it didn't help tha
*Edited Breanna's POV They dragged her in, chains and ropes, back to the large room on the cold iron floor of the basement. "Lets hope your boyfriend loves you enough." One of the men who she now recognized as Ricco, juts, throwing her on the floor. Tiana crawled to her quickly, with more bruises on her than before was dragged away for the phone call. "Boyfriend?." Tiana asked quietly. "And if not, well?." He asked his partner - Yakub and they crackled. "We, get to have fun with you." "Why don't you just piss off!." Tiana spat. "Watch your filthy mouth." He snapped ready to beat her up again. Tiana was yet again about to reply him, but Breanna stopped her. "Tiana, please." She called out softly. If the girl kept getting into trouble this much, it might as well be the end of her. Breanna wasn't sure she would have the strength to survive the place if Tiana was not there. Tiana cursed under her breath. "Yeah, that’s what I thought." He hissed and left with his partner. "So I w
*Edited Breanna's POVWith shaky hands and tears in eyes, she sent the numbers to Max. The previous plan of going to the bathroom to send the text, thrown out the window. Dread began to fill her, knowing that they never got around to planning how to return the phone.But non of that mattered anymore. Tiana getting beat up and dragged away like a slave in the sixteenth century was not part of the plan. After this experience, Breanna didn’t even know how to continue with life if she eventually made it out. Three years of therapy or more was for sure in her future.She finally got a glimpse of what Tiana and Daisy faced each time they took one of the girls. It was absolutely awful.Tiana once mentioned that she wasn't sure they killed Ophelia and Wendy, they probably used them to traffic something and had hoped to try to find them if she ever got out alive. It was what Daisy would have wanted.It was really heart warming, but Breanna didn't think Tiana was going to be that lucky. Or if s
*Edited Maxwell's POV Maxwell jerked awake, a grunt leaving his dry chapped lips as pain shot through his sides. He heaved a sigh of relief as his eyes found Breanna asleep on the hospital bed. Breanna had been right about the Bee factory, her tip was enough for the police to track the phone's IP adddress. He was not supposed to be there, it went against every work ethic, but there was no option of not going. It was not possible. Steve had to stow him away in the van of the CIA officers convoy on the condition that he stayed in the car and not interfere because his dad had talked to the DO to make sure he stay at home. Tech guy Zayn, as they called him now, was quick to find the previous owners of the factory since it had been sold about ten times over the years. The previous owners give them the original blueprint of the bee factory and access to CCTV footage of the bee factory of cameras that were still working anyways, in under 30 minutes. Perks of working with the CIA and Loca