His Unwanted Girlfriend Reviews

His Unwanted Girlfriend
His Unwanted Girlfriend
Author: triciaarz
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Trinidad Tumanda
Trinidad Tumanda
good for your past time
2022-05-25 15:52:41
2
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YourDaily Outfit
YourDaily Outfit
cute love story
2022-05-25 15:21:18
1
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ek77_m45
ek77_m45
a good read...
2022-05-25 10:19:33
3
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nightlady_smile
nightlady_smile
grammar issues, the story is entertaining though...
2022-05-25 09:58:38
3
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M.Z. Mauve
M.Z. Mauve
the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious. the narration has a melancholic tone to it. tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work
2021-10-06 08:05:37
6
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vii
Loved the story
2021-10-03 23:59:53
4
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Teddy Bear
Teddy Bear
Wow!! I love this story...
2021-10-03 19:03:57
3
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A.R.Sanusi
A.R.Sanusi
muah. I'm in love with this book. hehe
2021-09-29 15:01:15
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Authouress preshy
Authouress preshy
nice piece
2021-08-27 11:49:36
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Zielle Delacruz
Zielle Delacruz
I'm so in love with Manu here! Ugh, it's already pay to read but wait for me Manu I'm gunna getchu!
2020-07-30 03:49:52
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