grammar issues, the story is entertaining though...
2022-05-25 09:58:38
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M.Z. Mauve
the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious.
the narration has a melancholic tone to it.
tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work
2021-10-06 08:05:37
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vii
Loved the story
2021-10-03 23:59:53
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Teddy Bear
Wow!! I love this story...
2021-10-03 19:03:57
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A.R.Sanusi
muah. I'm in love with this book. hehe
2021-09-29 15:01:15
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Authouress preshy
nice piece
2021-08-27 11:49:36
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Zielle Delacruz
I'm so in love with Manu here! Ugh, it's already pay to read but wait for me Manu I'm gunna getchu!