LOGINAva barely slept.
She tossed and turned until the numbers on her alarm clock blurred together. Every time she drifted close to sleep, she saw it again: thick black letters pressed into cream paper, spelling out a future she didn’t want to believe. He will never wake up.
By morning, the letter might as well have been carved into her bones.
She dragged herself out of bed, splashed cold water on her face, and told herself she was being ridiculous. Someone was messing with her. That was all. She’d ignore it, pretend it didn’t matter.
But stuffing the letter deeper into her backpack before leaving for school didn’t help. It felt like carrying a live wire.
The hallways were buzzing with the usual Monday noise: lockers slamming, sneakers squeaking, someone blasting music too loud from a phone shoved in their hoodie pocket.
Ava kept her head down, weaving through the chaos until—
“Morning, zombie.”
Eli fell into step beside her, grinning as he shifted the straps of his backpack. His curly hair stuck up like he hadn’t even glanced at a mirror, and his shoelaces were mismatched as usual—one neon green, one plain white.
Ava forced a smile. “Morning.”
“You okay? You look like you’ve been in a fight with your pillow.”
She wanted to laugh. Wanted to say, Yeah, well, my pillow won. But her throat caught. Because the truth was, she hadn’t been in a fight with her pillow. She’d been in a fight with fate.
“I’m fine,” she said, maybe too quickly.
Eli raised an eyebrow but didn’t push. That was one of the things she loved about him—he never asked for more than she was ready to give.
They walked to first period together. He filled the silence with chatter about the math quiz he definitely hadn’t studied for, and a video he’d seen of a raccoon stealing an entire pizza from someone’s porch. Normally, Ava would’ve teased him, maybe sent him a meme mid-class just to see him snort-laugh at his desk. But today, the words slipped past her.
All she could think about was that sentence. If you do, he will never wake up.
By lunchtime, her nerves were shot. She couldn’t sit still, couldn’t focus. Every scrape of a chair, every burst of laughter sounded too sharp, like the world was vibrating at the wrong frequency.
She ducked out of the cafeteria and found a quiet spot by the vending machines. Her hand slipped into her backpack almost on its own, fingers brushing the folded envelope.
It wasn’t proof of anything. Just words. Ink.
But still.
“Why are you hiding back here?”
She flinched. Eli leaned against the wall, balancing a soda on his knee. He looked at her like she was a puzzle he wasn’t sure how to solve.
“Just… needed some air,” she said.
He studied her for a beat, then shrugged. “Fair. The cafeteria smells like feet today.”
Despite herself, Ava let out a shaky laugh.
Eli cracked open his soda. “So what’s really going on?”
Her chest tightened. For a second, she almost told him. Almost pulled out the letter and shoved it into his hands just to make it someone else’s problem.
But what if it scared him? What if he thought she was losing it?
“Nothing,” she lied.
Eli gave her a long look but didn’t argue. “Okay. Well, whatever it is, you’ll figure it out. You always do.”
He said it casually, like it was fact. But the words lodged in Ava’s ribs, heavy and sharp.
If only he knew.
The final bell rang, and Ava’s stomach flipped. The day was over. Which meant it was time to go home. Which meant facing the choice.
She could already feel the pull of routine tugging her toward the shortcut. The cracked path behind the gas station was automatic—muscle memory. But the letter’s warning was louder now, almost pulsing in her ears.
Do not take the shortcut.
Eli jogged up beside her, tossing his backpack higher on his shoulder. “Race you to the corner store?”
Her mouth went dry.
This was it. The moment the letter had pointed to.
“Uh… maybe not today,” she said. Her voice cracked.
Eli frowned. “Since when do you skip gummy worms?”
She opened her mouth to answer, but before she could, a group of kids from their math class called Eli over. He waved, then turned back to her. “I’ll meet you at the shortcut, okay? Don’t ditch me.”
Ava froze.
“No!” The word shot out too loud, too fast. Heads turned. Her face burned.
Eli blinked at her. “Okay… jeez. What’s with you?”
“I—just—let’s take the long way,” she said, forcing her voice steady.
Eli stared like she’d grown a second head. But then he shrugged. “Fine, drama queen. Long way it is.”
They turned down the main road instead. Cars whooshed past, the smell of exhaust heavy in the air. The walk felt endless, Ava’s nerves stretched so tight she thought she might snap.
Halfway home, sirens wailed in the distance.
Ava stopped cold.
Her chest constricted as a fire truck and two ambulances screamed past, lights flashing. They were heading… toward the gas station. Toward the shortcut.
Her blood ran cold.
She gripped Eli’s arm without thinking.
“Whoa, Ava. You okay?” he asked, startled.
She couldn’t answer. Couldn’t breathe.
All she could do was watch the sirens vanish down the road, a sick certainty clawing at her insides.
If they’d taken the shortcut, if she hadn’t said anything—
Her knees went weak.
The letter had been right.
The shattered mirror lay cold and lifeless on the apartment floor. Ava knelt beside it, her hands hovering over the jagged edges. The hum of the system had vanished. The letters were gone, leaving only faint traces of ink that seemed to shimmer like memories.She breathed slowly, trying to convince herself the nightmare had ended. But the weight of choice still pressed against her chest. She had broken the loop. She had faced herself. But now came the question she had avoided since the very first letter arrived: what would she do with the knowledge? With the system? With the power that had been handed to her?Eli’s hand on her shoulder jolted her from her thoughts. “We’re safe,” he said. His voice was low, exhausted, but steady. “For now.”Ava nodded. “Safe… but it’s not over. Not really. We can’t just leave this.”He frowned. “What do you mean?”“The system,” she whispered. “The experiment. My mom’s work… the letters. They were meant to protect, to warn, but also to control. I can’t
The tunnel leading from the machine was quiet, almost too quiet. Ava and Eli moved carefully, each step echoing off the concrete walls, their shadows stretching in the flickering light of their flashlights.Behind them, the hum of the machine was gone, replaced by a hollow, vibrating silence. Ava’s stomach twisted. The system was dormant for now, but she knew it was learning, recalibrating. Watching. Waiting.“Are we really done?” Eli asked, voice low.Ava shook her head. “I don’t think it ever stops. It just… pauses until the next loop.”Her mind raced, replaying everything she had just survived: the fire, the letters, the reflections, the machine itself. All of it had led to this moment — the point where she could finally see what the system had been preparing her for.The motel room came back to her memory, the static, the first letter, the gas station. All loops converging into one. She could feel it — the pull of the loop, the inevitability of dusk, the system’s unblinking gaze.
The hum of the machines was deafening.Ava stepped forward, each footfall echoing against the concrete floor like a warning. The walls around her were lined with cables, blinking lights, and screens showing streams of code she didn’t understand but felt like they were staring at her.Eli followed closely, his face tense, every sense alert. He had been quiet since they entered the sub-level, and Ava didn’t need him to speak — her own thoughts were screaming loud enough for both of them.“This… this is insane,” she whispered, moving closer to a console. Her fingers hovered over a panel that pulsed rhythmically, almost like a heartbeat.Eli shook his head. “Not insane. Controlled. Every light, every hum — it’s alive, in a way. Responds to us.”She glanced at him. “Alive? You mean… it’s sentient?”He nodded slowly. “Not human. But aware enough to adapt. We move, it watches. We pause, it learns. Every step we take, every choice we make, it predicts — maybe even manipulates outcomes.”Ava’s
Ava woke to the same hum of static that had haunted her the past two nights. The motel room was dim, the blinds rattling against the wind outside. Her phone read 5:42 p.m. again.Her chest tightened. Dusk. The loop. The letters.She swung her legs over the side of the bed and tried to remember if she had slept at all. Each day in the loop felt stretched, fractured, like her memory was stitched with gaps. She had to act fast.The envelope from the night before lay on the nightstand. She tore it open, her fingers trembling.You have one chance to change the outcome. Start where it all began — before the fire. Find the experiment. Trust no one.The word experiment made her stomach twist. Her mom. The letters. Everything started to make sense — and none of it made her feel safer.Ava grabbed her backpack. She stuffed in water, a few granola bars, and the letters. She didn’t know what she was looking for, only that she had to find answers before dusk ended the day again.⸻The bus ride was
It had been two days since Ava ran.Two days of half-sleeping in borrowed corners, of coffee-shop bathrooms and bus stations, of watching the sky turn that bruised color right before dawn and wondering if it meant she was still inside the same day.She’d left her phone on, but the screen kept flickering — text threads scrambled into unreadable symbols, Eli’s name appearing and vanishing. Once, a call came through that sounded like her voice breathing on the other end.She’d hung up.Then turned the phone off.Then back on again, because being alone was worse.Now she sat at a diner counter on the edge of town, staring into a chipped mug of coffee gone cold. The TV above the register hissed with static between news clips. Every so often she thought she heard a word slip through — something soft, like her name.She pressed her fingers to her temples. “You’re just tired,” she whispered to herself.But when she blinked, the reflection in the chrome napkin dispenser didn’t blink with her.
The night swallowed her.Ava ran until her legs gave out, until the ache in her lungs blurred into the ache in her chest. The streets around her thinned into trees, houses giving way to open fields that glittered faintly under the moonlight.She stopped when she reached the edge of a narrow service road. The air smelled like rain and gasoline. Her shoes were wet, her hands raw from where she’d fallen, and her reflection’s voice still echoed in her skull like static:Don’t trust him.Eli.The one person she thought she could trust.She pressed her hands to her ears, like she could block the thought out, but it was inside her head now — part of her.You didn’t run fast enough.She dropped her bag in the grass and sank to her knees.For the first time since the letters began, she let herself cry — ugly, gasping sobs that came in waves. Everything she’d been holding back — the fear, the confusion, the guilt — tore free.When it passed, she sat there trembling, breath ragged, until the wor







