LOGINSixteen-year-old Ava never expected her future to show up in the form of a letter. When she discovers a mysterious envelope slipped under her bedroom door—written in handwriting that looks eerily like her own—she brushes it off as a cruel prank. But the message inside is impossible to ignore: Tomorrow, do not take the shortcut home. If you do, he will never wake up. The next day, Ava changes her routine. And in doing so, she prevents a tragedy that could have cost her best friend his life. More letters arrive, each warning her of choices she hasn’t made yet—choices that will unravel family secrets, test her friendships, and place her in the middle of a dangerous puzzle only she can solve. With every decision, Ava begins to wonder if the future she’s trying to protect is already written… or if she has the power to change it.
View MoreAva almost missed it.
The envelope was lying on the floor just inside her bedroom door, half-buried beneath the hoodie she’d peeled off and tossed carelessly earlier that afternoon. At first glance, she thought it was one of those takeout flyers her mom’s boyfriend, Rick, sometimes slid under the door when he wanted her to check out a new pizza place. Cheap glossy paper, too many exclamation points, pictures of greasy cheese.
But this wasn’t glossy. It wasn’t flimsy.
It was thick, creamy stationery—the kind that felt old-fashioned, like the letters in period dramas her mom binged late at night when she thought Ava was asleep. The kind of paper that didn’t belong in their house, where most communication happened through half-shouted conversations over running faucets and clattering dishes, or more often through texts that could be ignored.
Her name was written across the front in looping black ink: AVA.
No last name. No return address. No stamp.
Just three letters that made her skin prickle.
Ava crouched to pick it up, her brows pinching together. Her mom never wrote notes. Ever. And her friends? If they had something to say, they texted, snapped, or spammed her with memes until she responded. Nobody her age owned envelopes, let alone used them.
She turned it over in her hands. The flap wasn’t sealed. Which was almost worse, like the writer hadn’t even bothered to pretend this was private—like they wanted her to read it right away.
Ava hesitated, then slid a finger beneath the fold and pulled out a single sheet of paper.
The handwriting was neat but quick, the kind of script that looked like it had been scrawled in a hurry, as though every second mattered.
It read:
Tomorrow, do not take the shortcut home. If you do, he will never wake up.
There was no greeting. No signature.
Just one word at the bottom, pressed harder into the paper than the rest, as though the pen had nearly torn through.
You.
Ava’s heart gave a hard, uncomfortable thud.
She read it again, slower this time, but the words didn’t change. The threat hung there on the page, bold and certain, like a verdict.
Do not take the shortcut home.
Her shortcut.
Everyone at school knew Ava used the cracked, narrow path behind the gas station to shave ten minutes off her walk home. Everyone teased her for it, too—it stank of motor oil and rotting garbage in the summer, and stray cats always hissed from the shadows—but she took it anyway. Every single day. She hated wasting time, and those ten minutes mattered.
If you do, he will never wake up.
Her chest tightened. He.
There was only one person that could mean.
Eli.
Eli had walked the shortcut with her more times than she could count, their sneakers crunching on gravel, their conversations bouncing from school gossip to weird hypotheticals to who would win in a fight between a T-Rex and a grizzly bear. Eli, who was the only person she trusted with her real secrets. Eli, who always carried extra gummy worms because he knew she’d “forget” her money at the corner store.
He would never wake up.
She dropped the letter on her bed like it burned.
It had to be a prank. Some sick joke. Someone from school messing with her, trying to get under her skin. Kids could be cruel, and Ava had made herself an easy target more than once with her too-quick temper and her habit of zoning out in class.
But how would anyone know? How could they possibly know about the shortcut—and about Eli?
Her throat went dry. She picked the letter back up, holding it with both hands like it might shatter.
The handwriting snagged at her memory. Something about the way the letters curled, the sharp angle of the Y in You—it was too familiar. She’d seen it before, somewhere close. Not from her mom, not from Eli. From herself.
It looked disturbingly like her own handwriting.
Her breath caught.
That wasn’t possible. It couldn’t be. Unless—
“No,” she muttered, shaking her head hard, like she could rattle the thought out before it stuck. “Nope. Not going there.”
She folded the letter once, then again, then shoved it deep into her backpack beneath her math binder. Out of sight, out of mind. That was the plan.
She wasn’t going to tell her mom. Her mom would just sigh, rub her temples, and chalk it up to Ava being dramatic again. She definitely wasn’t going to tell Rick, who’d probably joke about stalkers and creep her out even more.
She thought about texting Eli, maybe sending him a picture of the letter with a string of laughing emojis to prove how little it rattled her. But the idea made her stomach twist. What if it wasn’t funny? What if showing him made it too real?
Instead, she paced.
Her room was too small for pacing. Two steps from the desk to the closet, pivot, two steps back again. Her curtains fluttered against the cracked-open window, letting in a faint breeze that carried the distant sounds of traffic and kids still playing on the street. Normal noises. Normal day.
And yet.
She couldn’t stop hearing the words. Couldn’t stop picturing them glowing on the inside of her eyelids every time she blinked.
Do not take the shortcut home. If you do, he will never wake up.
Her pulse drummed in her ears.
She sat on the edge of her bed, gripping the comforter until her knuckles turned white. The letter was just paper. Words written in ink. Nothing supernatural, nothing impossible.
So why did it feel like her tomorrow had already been hijacked?
Why did it feel like the moment she opened that envelope, she’d stepped into a story she didn’t understand—one she couldn’t walk back out of?
She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to slow her breathing. It was fine. It had to be fine. Tomorrow she’d go to school, pretend nothing happened, and laugh it off. Maybe she wouldn’t take the shortcut—just to prove to herself she wasn’t shaken. Then again, maybe she would—just to prove she wasn’t scared.
Either way, she was still Ava. Just a normal sixteen-year-old.
But deep down, in the quiet place she rarely admitted even to herself, Ava wasn’t sure she believed that anymore.
And for the first time in a long time, she wasn’t sure she wanted tomorrow to come at all.
The shattered mirror lay cold and lifeless on the apartment floor. Ava knelt beside it, her hands hovering over the jagged edges. The hum of the system had vanished. The letters were gone, leaving only faint traces of ink that seemed to shimmer like memories.She breathed slowly, trying to convince herself the nightmare had ended. But the weight of choice still pressed against her chest. She had broken the loop. She had faced herself. But now came the question she had avoided since the very first letter arrived: what would she do with the knowledge? With the system? With the power that had been handed to her?Eli’s hand on her shoulder jolted her from her thoughts. “We’re safe,” he said. His voice was low, exhausted, but steady. “For now.”Ava nodded. “Safe… but it’s not over. Not really. We can’t just leave this.”He frowned. “What do you mean?”“The system,” she whispered. “The experiment. My mom’s work… the letters. They were meant to protect, to warn, but also to control. I can’t
The tunnel leading from the machine was quiet, almost too quiet. Ava and Eli moved carefully, each step echoing off the concrete walls, their shadows stretching in the flickering light of their flashlights.Behind them, the hum of the machine was gone, replaced by a hollow, vibrating silence. Ava’s stomach twisted. The system was dormant for now, but she knew it was learning, recalibrating. Watching. Waiting.“Are we really done?” Eli asked, voice low.Ava shook her head. “I don’t think it ever stops. It just… pauses until the next loop.”Her mind raced, replaying everything she had just survived: the fire, the letters, the reflections, the machine itself. All of it had led to this moment — the point where she could finally see what the system had been preparing her for.The motel room came back to her memory, the static, the first letter, the gas station. All loops converging into one. She could feel it — the pull of the loop, the inevitability of dusk, the system’s unblinking gaze.
The hum of the machines was deafening.Ava stepped forward, each footfall echoing against the concrete floor like a warning. The walls around her were lined with cables, blinking lights, and screens showing streams of code she didn’t understand but felt like they were staring at her.Eli followed closely, his face tense, every sense alert. He had been quiet since they entered the sub-level, and Ava didn’t need him to speak — her own thoughts were screaming loud enough for both of them.“This… this is insane,” she whispered, moving closer to a console. Her fingers hovered over a panel that pulsed rhythmically, almost like a heartbeat.Eli shook his head. “Not insane. Controlled. Every light, every hum — it’s alive, in a way. Responds to us.”She glanced at him. “Alive? You mean… it’s sentient?”He nodded slowly. “Not human. But aware enough to adapt. We move, it watches. We pause, it learns. Every step we take, every choice we make, it predicts — maybe even manipulates outcomes.”Ava’s
Ava woke to the same hum of static that had haunted her the past two nights. The motel room was dim, the blinds rattling against the wind outside. Her phone read 5:42 p.m. again.Her chest tightened. Dusk. The loop. The letters.She swung her legs over the side of the bed and tried to remember if she had slept at all. Each day in the loop felt stretched, fractured, like her memory was stitched with gaps. She had to act fast.The envelope from the night before lay on the nightstand. She tore it open, her fingers trembling.You have one chance to change the outcome. Start where it all began — before the fire. Find the experiment. Trust no one.The word experiment made her stomach twist. Her mom. The letters. Everything started to make sense — and none of it made her feel safer.Ava grabbed her backpack. She stuffed in water, a few granola bars, and the letters. She didn’t know what she was looking for, only that she had to find answers before dusk ended the day again.⸻The bus ride was
It had been two days since Ava ran.Two days of half-sleeping in borrowed corners, of coffee-shop bathrooms and bus stations, of watching the sky turn that bruised color right before dawn and wondering if it meant she was still inside the same day.She’d left her phone on, but the screen kept flickering — text threads scrambled into unreadable symbols, Eli’s name appearing and vanishing. Once, a call came through that sounded like her voice breathing on the other end.She’d hung up.Then turned the phone off.Then back on again, because being alone was worse.Now she sat at a diner counter on the edge of town, staring into a chipped mug of coffee gone cold. The TV above the register hissed with static between news clips. Every so often she thought she heard a word slip through — something soft, like her name.She pressed her fingers to her temples. “You’re just tired,” she whispered to herself.But when she blinked, the reflection in the chrome napkin dispenser didn’t blink with her.
The night swallowed her.Ava ran until her legs gave out, until the ache in her lungs blurred into the ache in her chest. The streets around her thinned into trees, houses giving way to open fields that glittered faintly under the moonlight.She stopped when she reached the edge of a narrow service road. The air smelled like rain and gasoline. Her shoes were wet, her hands raw from where she’d fallen, and her reflection’s voice still echoed in her skull like static:Don’t trust him.Eli.The one person she thought she could trust.She pressed her hands to her ears, like she could block the thought out, but it was inside her head now — part of her.You didn’t run fast enough.She dropped her bag in the grass and sank to her knees.For the first time since the letters began, she let herself cry — ugly, gasping sobs that came in waves. Everything she’d been holding back — the fear, the confusion, the guilt — tore free.When it passed, she sat there trembling, breath ragged, until the wor
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