Start off great, but close to the end doesn't make sense. You could have told us more about what happened with the baby.? What happened with the beta because he wasn't locked up? What happened to the other alpha territory? All in all great book
2023-10-13 15:48:56
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Joyel Castro
I really like the story. just once though I would either like the boys to wait or have the girl not be a virgin because it seems so wrong that she saves herself and he can be what they call a man w**** and she still gives in. I like though that Jenner and his pack you wait for their mates
2023-10-13 13:02:51
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Sheila
Absolutely loved this story!! Loved the twins!!!
2023-10-13 03:40:14
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Esther Carolina Melendez
Nice story enjoyed very much
2023-10-09 02:26:17
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Catherine O Shea
Great book
2023-10-08 20:52:50
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Hadassah Wealth
It’s very interesting, I loved the character Jane played…. It a must read book for everyone, I’ve read it severally and I will keep reading it ...️
2023-10-08 00:30:02
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Delinda Schumacher
7 chapters 7-11-23
2023-07-11 16:20:13
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Michelle Barrett
A nice, easy read. Very few grammatical errors and no strange name swaps. I loved the banter between Jenner and his ranked wolves. Jane’s character grows well, but then seems to revert again. Sex scenes were good. Ending felt a little rushed. Overall 4.75 stars.
2023-10-08 06:52:20
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shelbymenser
I enjoyed this story. My two main issues with this story is 1. I wish their issues had been solved with an insane amount of groveling on the guys part. 2. The end wasn't very well developed IMO