PROPOSAL

THIRD PERSON’S POV

She felt him slow down, ‘No Carl, don’t stop, go on harder’ she urged him on, panting, clawing at his back and shoulders, as the sensations built inside her like a tsunami.

The delicious wave broke over her in a rush of feeling that transported her ecstasy. A brilliant, earth-shattering ecstasy that left her body like a resounding echo.

Melanie felt his release come close behind hers. The tension in his body shuddered through her body like a resounding echo.

They both lay back on the bed breathing heavily.

‘What now?’ Melanie asked thinking about what he had said regarding seeking custody of Liam

‘I don’t want to hurt you Mel, and I know that taking Liam away will hurt you, he needs a mother but he needs me too. I don’t appreciate that you are trying to take him away from me’

‘Carl, you are welcome in his life too, I can’t take your place from his life, but I don’t want him to be with you and a step mom as he grows.’

‘I don’t want him to have a step father too, not