17 chapters in and I’m enjoying it. It could do with some editing but otherwise I have an enjoyable reading experience. Good work, author!
2024-07-07 09:26:59
7
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Christy Parr
really good but what is it are some of her part made of gold
2024-06-30 13:11:32
5
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Delinda Schumacher
95 chapters 5-11-24
2024-05-11 21:39:03
3
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Shannon Featherstone
when does it get updated?
2024-05-01 20:40:17
4
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Selene
It's a good storyline. And the characters come across as distinct. But it's too fast. It could use editing. I'm at ch.50 and it's gotten repetitive. FL was strong and now seems to be susceptible to kidnapping all the time. FL isn't learning. More like a screenplay the emotion isn't coming through.