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Chapter 7: On the Record

Author: ToriWrites
last update publish date: 2026-08-12 00:03:14

Elena's first twice-weekly appointment fell on a Tuesday, and Eleanor was already in the waiting room when she arrived, seated with her hands folded like she'd been there for hours.

"You're three minutes late," Eleanor said, not looking up from her phone.

"Appointment's not for three more minutes," Elena said, and took the seat across from her without waiting for a response.

They sat in silence until a nurse called Elena's name. Eleanor stood too.

"I'll be joining," Eleanor said.

"No, you
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